I've had trouble finding aro folks on Fiverr who offer this service. I'd love to find a beta reader for my YA novel who can help make sure my story reflects the experience well. Thank you in advance!

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My last post on another sub was s bit messy so i rewrote this, hopefully much clearer than before.

Vampires are out to the world and Charlotte was raised by her grandmother who hated vampires. Charlotte gets sick and starts changing into a vampire so she has to go to school for others like her. She struggles and deals with self hatred and tries to come to terms that vampires aren't evil and they're no different from humans.

The series will focus on Charlotte's 4 years in school, dealing with all the drama of being teenagers and being vampires. Every season is also gonna have a bigger plotline.

Season 1: human teenagers have started popping up, obsessed with vampires, and some of them have gotten hurt and even died. It's discovered a student (maybe multiple) have been feeding on the humans, even though it's illegal.

Season 2: staff and students have started going missing. It's been kept on the down low by the headmistress and it's eventually discovered that the missing people were actually being killed and ritually sacrificed to raise an ancient evil. It ends with demons being created.

I still need to flesh out the other 2.

3: it will probably be something like the vampire leaders send people to do damage control, and prevent this from getting out to the humans, and the demon numbers are growing out of control and are wreaking havoc.

4: ? Humans take control over the school and it becomes human ran with a lot of staff being fired and replaced. Maybe, not sure.

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Hi everyone! I'm Ananta Singh, and I started writing my first novel when I was 12 years old. After months of planning, writing, and rewriting, that story became The Undying Veins.

It's a dark fantasy filled with ancient secrets, hidden powers, and a school where some doors were never meant to be opened. When a mysterious discovery changes everything, one ordinary girl finds herself pulled into a dangerous truth that has been waiting for centuries.

That's all I'll say... because the best secrets are the ones you discover yourself. 👀

I also share trailers and behind-the-scenes content on my YouTube channel, Eternal Tales.

I'd genuinely love to hear your thoughts. What does this hook make you expect from the story? Any feedback is welcome!

Hi everyone! 😊

I'd love to introduce my daughter's fantasy story on Wattpad. She is only 10 years old and has poured so much imagination, creativity, and hard work into writing it. As her parent, I'm incredibly proud of her and wanted to help her find readers who enjoy fantasy adventures.

If you love magical worlds, exciting adventures, and discovering new writers, we'd be so grateful if you gave her story a chance. Every read, vote, comment, and piece of feedback means the world and encourages her to keep writing and improving.

She would be very happy to get any advice and tips from other writers

📖 Sophie and More: Unlock the Door

https://www.wattpad.com/story/413147548?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=LailaandOla

Thank you so much for supporting a young aspiring author! ❤️

Hello!! YA novel, Sci-fi/fanstay: I'm on my fourth draft of the story and am mostly concerned about flow, chapter length, plot, character development, etc. I'll attach the synopsis and a blurb below! :)

{...}
Normal teenage things: love, treason, overthrowing the government, being runaways, almost dying–wait…what?!

A moody princess with a dark history, her younger brother who’s keeping just as many secrets; a hopeful scientist from her dying planet, in a secret relationship; a warrior princess also in a secret relationship; a shy and clever prince who’s never left his planet; and a genius bookworm with a need for justice…what could possibly go wrong?

The six of them have to fight their way through the most epic story in the history of The Alliance of Galactic Security- TAGS, if you will; in the process they’ll fall in love, commit treason, and so much more…but those are just normal teenage things- right?

{...}

Prologue

Rhuta, Saturnalia

Little diamond raindrops hit the cobblestoned street, unknowingly masking the sound of wet and hasty footsteps. Bullets hit the wall behind six figures, chipping away bits of stone. Their shadows illuminated by the flamed street lamps, lit and set low because of the storm. Breath comes out like wisps of smoke in the cool air, and a layer of fog lies low to the ground. 

From somewhere far too close, someone- likely a guard-shouts, “Get them!”

They hear the rattle of guns against armor, metal on metal. Boots thunder and splash through puddles, the sound drowning out their heavy breathing. Lightning flashes overhead, followed by a crash of thunder, and another pelting of heavy rain leaves ball gowns and tuxedos soaked. The dark streets scream with wind as the six of them huddle against the back of a building, a small and tattered awning offering little reprieve from the unforgiving storm. Shouted commands and threatening footfalls grow distant, and they decide it’s safe to move again. Crouching and as quietly as possible, they dodge through the alleyways, inching closer to safety. Heels click in time with the rain, and the shuffle of tulle is drowned, expensive satin soaked and shiny. 

Armor clanks near them, and they freeze, ducking behind the nearest building, trying to silence their panting from running. They all look to one another, seeing the fear written so plainly across their features. 

“We have to go,” Rafe says, sliding his hand into Doone’s, “While we still can.”

{...}

Chapter One

DOONE 

3 Months Earlier

Red Oasis Palace, Venusia

Doone squints her eyes at the rising sun, feeling the fine sand build up on top of her silk scarf. She sits atop her horse, and looks out at the desert. Its angry rolling dunes and scorching winds are enough to ward off anyone inside the city walls. Off in the distance, she sees looming clouds, low to the ground. A sandstorm must be coming in. It’d take a while to get here, by nightfall perhaps, but it would be a harsh one. Looking to the horizon once more, Doone turns and calls her horse to run. The palace in view, she slows Zahara to a trot and unwraps her headscarf, sand trickling down her neck. The high clay walls of the palace cast shadows, shielding the blistering sun.

{...}

Ever since I can remember, I’ve wanted to become an author. But here’s the thing. I’m dyslexic.
I love reading, and I always know how to start my stories, but my family calls it just a hobby. I understand their reasoning, but I also wish they understood me.
I’m 15, turning 16 soon. My family wants me to become a doctor or a nurse. The thing is, I’m not really school-smart. I’m creative, but I’m terrible at math. Most other subjects are okay, but math? I suck. Honestly, the only thing I know is probably 2 + 2.
I was thinking about becoming a pharmacist because I think I’d enjoy it, and maybe my family would be happy with that. But they’re really pressuring me to become something more. I want to make them proud, but I don’t want to fail. I don’t want to become a nurse or a doctor if I’m not meant for it. I don’t want to risk someone’s life because I wasn’t the right person for that job. If being a pharmacist isn’t enough for them, then what will be?
How is it that I’m not enough just the way I am?
I’ve been writing this for about ten minutes. Even spelling some words takes me a while, but I’m getting through it.
There was a time when I thought I’d never be able to read or write because of my dyslexia. I still struggle, but maybe if I work hard enough, I can still accomplish the things I want to accomplish.
I guess I just want someone to hear me. Maybe someone will understand what I’m trying to say.
And if you relate to this, I hope things get better for you. I really do.

Long time published author and a fan of time travel.

So im a new writer.English is not my first language but one of the ones im best at.I didnt want to write the book in german. So my book revolves around two girls that have "a past with eachother". involves homophobia and one of the fmc gets a head injury resulting in amnesia .So what would you like to see in this book?Or any tips for me

ps:this is my first book

Dear YA writers of Reddit,

I have a question about how dark YA can be. I mean, I have an idea for YA Urban Fantasy story, where some magical drug is started to be sold in the city (Łódź, to be precise). And few (supporting) characters would take some of it.

To be precise, one of them (let's call him, W.) would take some of it with his friends (as demonstration of peer pressure) and fly into rage (for short time). This would scare him and he will never take it again. But still, this would create mess in among his siblings and show his sense of abandonment, because of his new family situation (his father married new wife just 2-3 month ago and her son, MC, isn't very friendly for him).

Other case would be with different character, who would take it unknowingly and go into a coma. And "detective case of the week" would be how it happened.

Of course, there would be also some E plot about paranomal counterpart of police (who are friends of main characters) trying to find who is making those drugs, because this substance make shapeshifters and even their descendants fly into rage. But I think big part of this investigation would be off-page.

But, I must ask you, is this plot too dark? I mean, I'm afraid if people (above all, publishers) would take my story as YA if there would be drugs in it, even if general message would be anti-stimulants. So, do you think something like that would be too dark?

(My characters are 14-15 years old, so judging by this, typical age of YA MCs.)

Thank you in advance for help. Let's have cultural conversation.

PS.: English isn't my native language (as you can deduce by me setting action in the middle of Poland), so please, be understanding of my errors.

Hi everyone! I'm looking for beta readers for a 28-page sample from the first book in a planned narrative nonfiction series, built around composite counseling case studies drawn from my private practice and prepared in accordance with HIPAA and APA de-identification guidelines.

The sample explores connections between psychology and Scripture. I'm not looking for agreement—I'm looking for constructive feedback on the writing, clarity, pacing, realism, and overall readability. Feedback from all readers is welcome. If you have a background in psychology, counseling, therapy, or social work, I'd especially appreciate your perspective on these areas.

If you're interested, please DM us. Thank you!

Hi all,

I've just finished the third draft of my debut YA magical realism novel, and after staring at it for far too long, I think it's finally ready for some fresh eyes before I start querying literary agents. I'm looking for 2–3 beta readers who enjoy character-driven YA, magical realism, found family, and emotionally focused stories.

Synopsis

Desperate to escape their past, a gang of teenage girls run away to sea on their makeshift ship 'The Scab and Plaster'. As dark secrets threaten to surface and the captain's dangerous behaviour worsens, she and her first mate soon learn that bottling up emotions can have nightmarish consequences. Blending magical realism with an emotionally grounded coming-of-age story, the novel explores trauma, healing, found family and the idea that recovery is a messy, non-linear process with no correct approach. 

Excerpt

I'm happy to share the opening chapter (or a sample) with anyone who's interested before sending the full manuscript.

Content Warnings

• Strong language
• References to abuse and trauma
• Emotional trauma
• Mild violence/peril
• Themes of grief and healing

Feedback I'm Looking For

I'm mainly interested in big-picture feedback rather than line edits, including:

• Overall enjoyment and whether the story kept you engaged
• Pacing (especially if any sections drag or feel rushed)
• Character development and emotional impact
• Clarity of the magical realism elements
• Plot holes or confusing moments
• Whether the ending feels satisfying

Honest feedback is exactly what I'm looking for, so please don't worry about sparing my feelings!

Timeline

There's no huge rush, but I'd ideally love feedback within 6–8 weeks if possible.

Critique Swap

I'd be happy to do a critique swap for another YA, fantasy, magical realism or contemporary novel of a similar length. While I'm not a professional editor, I've spent a lot of time revising my own manuscript and would do my best to provide thoughtful, detailed feedback focusing on story, pacing, characters and emotional impact.

If you're interested, please leave a comment or send me a DM. Thanks so much for considering it!

I’m drafting a book (comp: one of us is lying x nightmare on elm street) with a 4-person pov of schoolmates being stalked by a killer they’ve all had the same nightmares about (and one who killed their friend a year ago and is back). The killer taunts them by leaving notes exposing things they’ve done to each other and the book unravels these secrets as they try to find out who the killer is. Wondering if this is something that would be appealing to ya audiences or if this structure is oversaturated/ done too many times already.

I'm writing a book about a middle schooler named Grace. I have only written 4 chapters but i feel like its not very good. i dont hate it and i am proud of it but i want to know what real people think about the book before i continue.

Update! I started posting it on Wattpad. I posted the first 4 chapters and I am still writing chapter 5. Heres a link if you want to read! https://www.wattpad.com/story/413560744-quietly-becoming-me

My friend is a writer who writes fan fiction and I am their (self proclaimed) Idea machine. They come to me tell me they want to post a story it always been a story about certain characters usually ones from pop culture but with different outcomes or different couple pairing which puts it in the fan fiction category and I help by giving them idea or we bounce idea between each other.

these conversations usually go

Them: I want to write about these Supernatural characters becoming a couple

Me: ok here are 10 different way that could happen

Them: I'll go with this one so how should I start it off

Me: here are 10 way to start it off

Them: ok here's what I wrote what do you think

Me: it good but you she add this so it follows the world building

Them: ok I will so what do you think now

Me: it good you should post it

Them: ok I did so what should I do for chapter 2

and the whole process repeat.

I was fine with this setup because even if they were my idea my friend was the one who actually put pen to paper to bring the story to life not me. but this time things were different. We were making fun of over played romance story trope and how they all sound the same just different characters name. The next day I sent them a full on story synapse of one of the romance trope we joked about yesterday. I said "Hay I came up with this idea for this romance trope we joked about yesterday I want to write it what do you think" I then sent them the screen shot of what I had wrote.

few hours later they send me a link to the site where they post their fan-fiction stories. I click on it and it takes me to the page where you can view the writer future or out coming works.

And there posted for the world to see is my story Summary. They add and changed a few words but it reads the same. We meet up the next day to go over the story post

They start with so what do you think good right. I say yea (cus it's my story idea) they say so how should we start chapter 1.

our usually pattern starts but it's all my idea they don't add any but type out the chapter and post it. and like always my name is no where to be spotted which is important because any work published under the user profile is automatically subjected to copyright.

Nonetheless I thought it over and decided to just give the story to them.

I want no part of it. I gave them the idea now they gonna have to lay the ground work and build the story from beginning to middle to end 100% on their own. problem is how do I tell them that without sounding rude, bitter, petty, mad, or upset. They keep asking me for my idea and how they should write the story but I don't i want any part I dont even want to here how the story going if they decide to keep writing it but I dont want to cause conflict or end our friendship over it .I genuinely like and perfor giving people ideas for stories more than I like writing the story. But I refuse to be a ghostwriter. I don't believe in taking credit for other work. and even thought i read and like Fan-fiction I would never write it or post fan-fiction.

This book honestly started off as middle grade, but I've been working on it for three years and now I want it to be YA. But i feel like it still reads as a middle grade book. How can I fix this?

Yeah, I've watched in the beginning of the year a show, discontinued, and started to write about it in my own language, not English, adapting the story, the plot(to another) but the start is basically the same. Also characters hugely different, other names, personalities, some of them. Well, I'm struggling to feel... Like it's mine and, I'm not even watching the show to write it since it's not even the same events in the same order. I just really like the characters, the dynamics and the way the story progresses.

All of that, to say and ask, to writers of fanfic, and books based or inspired. When it starts feeling like your own and, how do you guys adapt and write? I've been struggling to write at all but that's another whole different thing.

I have an idea I recently came up with, a story that follows a girl turned vampire throughout her entire life, starting when she is bitten, then going through generations of human lives, and what she experiences over that time, like love, loss, family, rejection, etc. I think it is a good concept but I haven't really fine tuned it at all. Any feedback would be appreciated, thanks!

I need good publishers i can use that won't try to sell me a predatory offer?