r/WarhammerFanFiction 10d ago

Other Question of the Week: Who's Your Favorite Primarch?

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The Primarchs are some of the most iconic figures in Warhammer history.

Who's your favorite Primarch and why?

Feel free to share:

  • Your favourite loyalist or traitor Primarch.
  • A Primarch you think the fandom misunderstands.
  • A Primarch you'd follow into battle without hesitation.
  • A Primarch you'd absolutely never serve under.
  • The best Primarch relationship or rivalry.
  • Your favourite interpretation from a fanfic.
  • Your own headcanons or alternate-history ideas.
  • The moment, quote, or scene that made them your favourite.
  • Which Primarch had the greatest potential if history had gone differently.
  • Which Primarch you think had the most tragic fate.

Canon lore, fanfic portrayals, alternate Heresies, loyalist traitors, traitor loyalists, and bizarre crack timelines are all fair game.

Keep discussion civil, respect differing interpretations, and remember:

In the grim darkness of the far future, there is only war, and arguments about which Primarch was actually the best.


r/WarhammerFanFiction Oct 30 '25

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r/WarhammerFanFiction 7h ago

Other [Fantasy] A Sample as promised

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Liber Memoriae
-
Book of Memories
———
Asterion: The First Sentinel of the Emperor and the Memories He Recorded
———
“When kingdoms had not yet become worlds, and worlds had not yet become an Imperium, there stood one warrior beside the Emperor. He has never left His side.”
—Fragment recovered from the sealed archives beneath the Imperial Palace.

———

Compiled By: Archivist Varre & Lexmechanic Arcturus-9
Table of Contents
———
Introductus
Chronicle I - Before Gold
Chronicle II - The First Creation
Chronicle III - Shadow of Unity
Chronicle IV - Kingdoms of Ash
Chronicle V - The Cost of Waiting
Chronicle VI - The Forge of Thunder
Chronicle VII - The First Sparks
Chronicle VIII - The First Brothers
Chronicle IX - The First Lessons
Chronicle X - The Weight of Judgement
Chronicle XI - The Fires of Unity
Chronicle XII - The Long Road
Chronicle XIII - The First Blow
Chronicle XIV - A Thousand Fires
Chronicle XV - The Final Fires of Peace
Chronicle XVI - Unification Begins

Introductus

———

“I have stood the Eternity Gate for two hundred and seventeen years. He has acknowledged me only once.

He remembered my name…I had never told him.”

— Marginal note recovered from the watch journal of an unnamed Custodian

———

The Imperium remembers its victories.

It remembers worlds brought to compliance beneath banners of gold.

It remembers saints whose names became prayers.

It remembers Primarchs, crusades, and the long shadow of the Golden Throne.

Its monuments are vast.

Its cathedrals scrape the heavens.

Its histories fill libraries beyond measure.

Yet memory is not the same as history.

History preserves the deeds of empires.

Memory preserves the souls who built them.

Between the lines of every great chronicle are countless names never written.

The mason who laid the first stone.

The physician who bound the wounds of a weary soldier.

The child whose laughter briefly reminded a warrior what he fought to protect.

The forgotten dead, whose sacrifice became the foundation upon which monuments were raised.

Empires rarely remember such people.

One soul did.

For ten thousand years, he has stood where no mortal may tread.

He has witnessed the rise of the Imperium, the birth of its legends, and the slow fading of dreams once spoken with quiet certainty beneath the peaks of the Himalazia.

He remembers voices history discarded.

He remembers promises no archive preserved.

He remembers the laughter of brothers whose names were erased before the ink had dried.

He remembers the Emperor not as a distant god upon a throne, but as the man who still believed humanity could become more than the darkness that surrounded it.

He remembers because no one else can.

This is not the history of the Imperium.

Others have written that.

This is not the chronicle of its greatest victories.

Others have sung those songs.

This is the remembrance of those who stood before glory.

Those who carried hope before it became dogma.

Those who gave everything so that generations yet unborn might inherit a future they themselves would never see.

Many of the names contained within these pages have been lost.

Some were struck deliberately from every record.

Others faded beneath the relentless passage of ten millennia.

Where certainty has perished, only memory remains.

The truth of these pages rests not upon perfect recollection, but upon faithful remembrance.

For memory does not seek to glorify.

Memory seeks only to forget nothing.

If these words endure, let them endure not as scripture, nor as legend, but as witness.

For while history remembers empires…

Memory remembers people.

Thus begins Liber Memoriae—

The preserved chronicle of Asterion,

First Companion to the Master of Mankind,

Last Sentinel of the Golden Throne,

The Living Memory.

———
Chronicle I

———

Before Gold

———

“Before he stood beside the Master of Mankind…

…he stood beside ordinary men.”

There is no surviving record of the village in which Asterion was born.

No cartographer marked its name.

No chronicle preserved its history.

No monument records where its people once laughed beneath the skies of Old Terra.

Its fields have long since become dust.

Its roads forgotten.

Its language swallowed by ten thousand years.

Only one soul remembers.

———

The Village Before Dawn

———

The village woke before the sun.

Not because anyone commanded it.

Because life demanded it.

Before first light, lamps flickered to life behind weathered shutters. Bakers coaxed yesterday’s embers back into flame. Shepherds gathered their cloaks before leading restless flocks toward dew-covered hills. Blacksmiths opened their doors to the cool morning air, letting the scent of charcoal mingle with fresh bread and damp earth.

It was not a remarkable place.

It had no walls.

No lord.

No banners.

Its people measured wealth in full granaries, healthy children, and winters survived together.

To the rulers of Old Terra, it was beneath notice.

To those who lived there…

It was the whole world.

Among its narrow streets ran a boy whose name history would forget.

His feet were seldom still.

Not because he sought mischief.

Because wonder rarely walked.

It ran.

He greeted every morning as though the world had become new overnight.

Why did birds always sing before sunrise?

Why did frost disappear when touched by light?

Why did the old mill creak louder in autumn than in spring?

Questions followed him as faithfully as his own shadow.

The elders often laughed.

“One day,” they would say, “the boy will ask the stars why they shine.”

He likely would have.

Had history allowed him the chance.

———

The Boy Who Asked Why

———

His father was a carpenter.

Not a great artisan.

Not a renowned craftsman.

Simply a man whose hands understood wood better than words.

He believed little should ever be discarded.

Broken chairs became shelves.

Splintered beams became toys.

A cracked bowl became kindling only after every other purpose had been exhausted.

When asked why he repaired what others replaced, he would smile.

“Because everything deserves one more chance to be useful.”

The boy remembered those words.

Long after the man who spoke them had turned to ash.

His mother baked for the village.

Those who could pay did.

Those who could not…

Still ate.

She never announced her kindness.

She simply left an extra loaf upon a windowsill where she knew hungry hands would find it before dawn.

Once, the boy asked why she never waited to be thanked.

She brushed flour from his cheek and smiled.

“If they must choose between gratitude and dignity…”

“…let them keep their dignity.”

He never forgot that either.

———

Winter in Old Terra

———

The first snow always transformed the village.

Children celebrated.

Adults calculated.

Every snowfall was beautiful.

Every snowfall was measured.

Enough to water the spring.

Not enough to bury the roads.

The village knew survival depended upon such balances.

During winter evenings, families gathered around shared fires.

Tools were repaired.

Clothes mended.

Stories retold.

Some tales had been spoken so many times that no one remembered who first told them.

No one cared.

Stories belonged to everyone.

The boy listened more than he spoke.

He learned that every elder remembered the same event differently.

At first he thought someone must be mistaken.

Later…

He wondered whether memory itself possessed many faces.

———

The Traveler

———

One autumn, an old traveler came through the valley.

His boots had crossed more roads than anyone in the village could imagine.

His cloak bore patches from a dozen distant lands.

He carried no weapon.

Only a weathered instrument and a satchel filled with maps.

For three evenings he remained.

He traded stories for supper.

Songs for shelter.

Laughter for another place by the fire.

The children crowded around him.

The boy most of all.

He learned of mountains whose peaks pierced the clouds.

Cities larger than forests.

Rivers so broad the opposite shore vanished into mist.

The world, he realized, was immeasurably larger than his home.

When the traveler departed, he left behind nothing but footprints…

And the certainty that there were still questions waiting beyond the horizon.
———

The Things Others Missed

———

The boy possessed no extraordinary gift.

He was not the strongest among the children.

Nor the fastest.

Nor the loudest.

His gift was quieter.

He noticed.

He noticed that the widow always pretended she had already eaten whenever food grew scarce.

He noticed the shepherd who greeted every sheep by name before sunrise.

He noticed the baker secretly making the smallest loaf larger whenever hungry children wandered past.

He noticed his father’s shoulders sagged only after everyone else had gone to sleep.

He noticed his mother hummed the same melody whenever worry found her heart.

No one taught him to pay attention.

He simply believed small things mattered.

He never imagined they would become the greatest treasures he would ever possess.

———

The Last Harvest

———

The seasons continued.

Until one failed to feel like the others.

Travelers became fewer.

Those who arrived carried anxious eyes.

Smoke sometimes marked the distant horizon.

The adults spoke in quieter voices.

Doors remained barred after sunset.

Conversations ceased whenever children entered the room.

The boy asked why.

No one answered.

Not because they wished to deceive him.

Because they themselves did not know.

Old Terra had begun to consume itself.

Its wars rolled ever closer, unseen but inevitable, like thunder beyond distant hills.

Still…

Life continued.

The fields were planted.

Bread was baked.

Children laughed.

The village chose hope because it knew no other way to live.

None among them understood they were gathering for their final harvest.

———

Before Gold

———

The fire came before dawn.

Not from lightning.

Not from accident.

But from the hands of men who had forgotten that those across the valley were also human.

The screams woke the village before the sun ever could.

Homes that had sheltered generations vanished within moments.

Neighbors became strangers in the smoke.

Parents became shields.

Children became refugees.

The boy searched desperately through the chaos.

For his father.

For his mother.

For anyone.

He found only fire.

And silence.

By the time the sun rose…

The village no longer existed.

When the warriors finally departed…

Two figures walked among the ruins.

One was a giant clad in simple armor of burnished steel, untouched by the heraldry of any tyrant.

The other was a boy kneeling beside the ashes of everything he had ever known.

The giant did not speak at first.

He did not offer promises.

He did not speak of vengeance.

Instead…

He knelt.

Together, they gathered the dead.

Together, they built the funeral pyres.

Together, they stood in silence as the smoke rose toward a sky that offered no answers.

Only after the last flame had settled into embers did the stranger look upon the boy.

“What remains?”

The question seemed impossible.

The boy looked around him.

“My home is gone.”

“Yes.”

“My family…”

His voice broke.

“…is gone.”

“Yes.”

“My village is gone.”

The stranger inclined His head.

“Yes.”

The boy lowered his eyes.

“Nothing remains.”

For a long time, the stranger said nothing.

Then He looked toward the eastern horizon, where dawn had finally begun to break through the smoke.

“You remain.”

No record tells us what passed between them after those words.

History remembers only that a nameless child vanished from the ashes of an unnamed village.

Centuries later…

The Imperium would know him by another name.

Asterion.

The First Sentinel.

But long before he became the Emperor’s companion…

Long before auramite.

Long before Vigil.

Long before the Golden Throne…

He had been a boy who believed that small acts of kindness deserved to be remembered.

And perhaps…

That was why the Emperor chose him.

Not because he was special, nor because he was strong.

Simply, because he refused to bend, and he refused to show any form of falter.

———

The Journey

———

Some time had passed, and the boy wondered when they’d reach their destination-
“Soon…” the stranger said, almost as if he sensed the question on the boys mind…
As if to emphasize the answer, the boy looked up to see a looming peak watching the hillside they were traversing.
Seeing their destination, the boys pace quickened, not to a run..he was not excited, his feet simply found their purpose again.
“Himalazia”
“Here…deep beneath the peak, beneath the cliff sides and snow drifts…there’s something I want to show you there..”

Chronicle II

“Prolepsis”

———

The First Creation

———

Beneath the hidden laboratories of the Himalazia, the Emperor began a work unlike any He had attempted before.

Thousands had perished.

Some survived only briefly.

Others became twisted failures.

The Emperor recorded every death without anger or frustration, refining His craft with relentless patience.

The nameless child endured.

Years became decades.

Bone was remade.

Blood rewritten.

Mind sharpened beyond humanity.

The transformation was so complete that nothing remained of the child save one thing.

The choice he had made.

When the final trial came, the Emperor led him into a chamber flooded with raw psychic radiance.

Any ordinary human would have died instantly.

Even lesser transhumans would have been driven mad.

The young giant staggered.

His muscles trembled.

His vision failed.

Yet he remained standing.

For the first time, the Emperor smiled with unmistakable satisfaction.

“Rise.”

The giant obeyed.

“You shall be called Asterion.”

He was not merely the first Custodian.

He was proof that such a being could exist.

———

The Vault of Echoes

———

Deep beneath the Himalazia lay a forgotten vault from the Dark Age of Technology.

Its guardians did not recognize flesh.

They recognized independent thought.

Machines annihilated anything they deemed capable of acting against their masters.

The Emperor entered.

Asterion followed.

The machines ignored him.

For the first time in many years, the Emperor stopped walking.

He looked upon His companion in silence.

Then, almost to Himself, He spoke.

“I succeeded.”

Not because Asterion lacked free will.

But because his purpose and the Emperor’s had become so perfectly aligned that ancient intelligences could no longer distinguish between creator and guardian.

———

The First Auramite

———

When Terra was finally united, the Emperor retired alone to His private forge beneath Himalazia.

For forty days no one saw Him.

When He emerged, He carried a suit of armor unlike anything humanity had ever witnessed.

Auramite.

Every plate had been forged by His own hands.

Every joint measured for one warrior alone.

The Emperor personally fastened each piece upon Asterion.

When the final clasp locked into place, He stepped back.

“Now you appear as I always intended.”

Asterion’s old steel armor was not destroyed.

Unknown even to him, the Emperor preserved it.

Its purpose had not yet come.

———

Vigil

———

When the Adeptus Custodes was founded, guardian spears became the mark of every one of the Ten Thousand.

Every one…

Except Asterion.

Instead, the Emperor disappeared once more into His forge.

For seven days the sound of hammer upon metal echoed beneath the mountains.

On the eighth day He emerged carrying a sword of impossible size.

A blade too great for any mortal to wield.

Too balanced to have been crafted by any human hand.

Into its golden fuller the Emperor carved ancient runes whose language predated civilization itself.

When He placed the weapon into Asterion’s hand, He spoke.

“This sword does not defend me.”

A pause.

“It defends what I cannot.”

The sword became known as Vigil.

Its true name has never been spoken.

———

The Sons of the Emperor

———

Asterion stood beside the Emperor as twenty gestation chambers glowed within the Primarch Project.

He watched as the Master of Mankind adjusted arcane mechanisms with the care of a father.

He saw the impossible become real.

He also witnessed the greatest catastrophe of the Emperor’s mortal life.

When the powers of the Warp scattered the infant Primarchs across the galaxy, Asterion saw something no one else ever would.

The Emperor ran.

Not strode.

Not marched.

Ran.

He reached the shattered laboratory too late.

For many minutes neither spoke.

At last the Emperor said only four words.

“We begin again.”

From that day onward, Asterion understood the measure of his creator.

Not perfection.

Resolve.

———

Horus Lupercal

———

Among all the Primarchs, Horus sought to know those who served his father.

He greeted palace servants by name.

He spoke with remembrancers.

He even attempted conversation with the silent Custodian who never answered.

Years later, after Ullanor, when Horus had been named War-Master, he sought Asterion one final time before departing Terra forever.

“They call me War-Master now.”

Silence.

“I wonder if I shall ever be worthy of it.”

For only the fifth recorded time in his life, Asterion spoke.

“Worthiness is not proven by victory.”

Horus frowned.

“Then by what?”

Asterion looked into the eyes of the Emperor’s favored son.

“By what you refuse to become.”

They never saw one another again.

Yet in the darkest moments aboard the Vengeful Spirit, when Horus briefly wrested control of his own soul from the gods that enslaved him, those words returned.

Not as prophecy.

Not as judgment.

As truth.

———

The Last Conversation

———

As the Horus Heresy consumed the Imperium, the Emperor prepared to ascend the Golden Throne.

Before He entered its eternal prison…

He summoned Asterion.

No record exists of what passed between them.

Malcador never spoke of it.

The Custodes never asked.

Asterion never answered.

It remains the final private conversation between creator and guardian.

Its words died with one.

Its meaning lives with the other.

———

The First Vigil

———

When the Emperor was enthroned, Asterion took his place beside Him.

He has never left.

Not for ten thousand years.

Empires have risen and fallen.

Captain-Generals have come and gone.

Saints have lived, died, and become legend.

Primarchs have disappeared into myth.

Still he stands.

The oldest sentinel in existence.

The first.

The last.

———

Aegis Imperialis

———

Millennia after the Heresy, the Ecclesiarchy was haunted by a recurring vision.

“Give him a shield.”

For two centuries every Ecclesiarch brought the same offering before the Imperial Palace.

For two centuries the Custodes refused.

Yet the shield continued to be worked by generations of anonymous artisans.

No single hand completed it.

Each generation added only one piece before passing it to the next.

Unknown to them all, its heart contained a fragment of battered steel recovered from a forgotten vault beneath Terra.

It was the breastplate of Asterion’s first armor.

The very plate the Emperor Himself had repaired during the Unification Wars.

When the completed shield was finally presented, Asterion stepped from his station for the first time in centuries.

He laid one hand upon it.

There was no miracle.

No blinding light.

Only recognition.

Humanity had unknowingly returned his first armor to him.

He accepted the shield.

Not for himself.

But for mankind.

It became known as Aegis Imperialis.

———

The Living Memory

———

Many Custodians are older than empires.

None are older than Asterion.

He remembers the Emperor’s voice.

The warmth of Old Terra’s sun before Unity.

The laughter of the Primarchs.

Malcador’s counsel.

Constantin Valdor’s first oath.

The dream of the Webway.

He remembers every lesson.

Every campaign.

Every word.

Not because he is sentimental.

Because a Custodian does not forget.

———

Today

———

Pilgrims crossing the Eternity Gate sometimes glimpse a colossal figure standing nearest the Golden Throne.

He bears no guardian spear.

In his right hand rests the ancient blade Vigil.

Upon his left arm shines Aegis Imperialis.

His armor is older than the Imperium.

His duty older still.

Many believe him to be merely another Custodian.

The oldest among the Ten Thousand know better.

He is not the greatest of them.

Nor their master.

He is something rarer.

He is the first proof that the Emperor’s dream could be made flesh.

He is Asterion.

And until the Emperor Himself commands otherwise…

The First Sentinel will never abandon His watch.

Chronicle III

———

The Shadow of Unity

———

The gates of the Himalazia closed with a sound that echoed long after the mountain had fallen silent.

Stone met stone.

Ancient mechanisms settled once more into stillness.

The hidden laboratories vanished behind walls older than memory itself.

No trace remained that, beneath those mountains, the future of mankind had taken its first breath.

The world above continued in ignorance.

It always had.

The Emperor did not look back.

Neither did Asterion.

There was nothing left to see.

———
The Future
———

Everything that mattered now lay before them.

For the first time since opening his eyes within the gene-forges, Asterion stepped beyond the sanctuary of the mountain.

Cold air greeted him.

Not the carefully regulated atmosphere of hidden vaults, but the living breath of Terra itself.

It carried the scent of dust.

Smoke.

Distant rain.

And something else.

Ash.

It lingered upon every breeze, as though the world itself had burned for so long that even the wind no longer remembered another fragrance

They walked in silence.

The Emperor neither hurried nor slowed His pace.

His stride remained measured, purposeful, almost contemplative.

Asterion matched it without effort.

Questions arose within him.

He voiced none of them.

He had already learned that the Emperor possessed a curious way of teaching.

Answers were seldom given.

They were discovered.

For seven days they crossed the lower reaches of the Himalazia.

The mountains bore scars that no storm had carved.

Entire cliffs had collapsed beneath forgotten bombardments.

Ancient roads ended abruptly where explosions had swallowed them whole.

Great bridges stretched proudly across valleys…

Only to disappear halfway across, their remaining spans hanging over empty air like broken promises.

Occasionally they encountered statues.

Most had fallen.

Those still standing had long since lost their faces.

Rain.

War.

Time.

Each had claimed its portion until no one remembered whom the monuments had once honored.

Asterion paused before one such figure.

The Emperor continued walking.

After several moments, Asterion followed.

“Who stood there?”

The Emperor answered without turning.

“A man who believed he would be remembered forever.”

Nothing more was said.

Beyond the mountains lay the first settlements.

If such places could still bear that name.

Families lived within the shells of forgotten buildings whose original purpose had vanished thousands of years before.

Children played between rusting machines larger than entire homes.

Some fashioned toys from fragments of circuitry whose true function had once guided ships between stars.

Now they skipped them across polluted streams.

Knowledge had not merely been lost.

It had become ordinary.

The Emperor stopped beside an elderly woman tending a small garden enclosed by broken ferrocrete.

The soil was poor.

Every harvest demanded labor beyond reason.

Yet green life persisted.

She looked upon the two travelers with tired eyes.

“You’ve come a long way.”

“We have.”

“You’ll find little worth seeing farther south.”

The Emperor smiled gently.

“I believe I shall.”

She shrugged.

“Suit yourself.”

She returned to her work without another word.

Only after they had continued down the road did Asterion speak.

“She did not know who You were.”

“No.”

“Would she have believed You?”

The Emperor considered the question.

“I would rather she believe tomorrow can be better.”

Asterion reflected upon that answer for many miles.

As the weeks passed, he began to understand what the Emperor wished him to see.

Not merely ruin.

Ruin was obvious.

Anyone could see broken cities.

Anyone could count the dead.

The Emperor looked elsewhere.

He noticed the physician who still carried medicines despite possessing almost none.

The teacher who gathered children beneath the remains of a collapsed transport to teach letters no government required.

The blacksmith who repaired tools without payment because his neighbors needed them.

The mother who divided one loaf among six children before taking none for herself.

Tiny acts.

Insignificant beside the scale of empires.

Yet the Emperor observed each with quiet satisfaction.

One evening, unable to restrain his curiosity any longer, Asterion finally asked,

“Why do You watch them so closely?”

The Emperor remained silent until sunset painted the broken horizon in crimson and gold.

Then He answered.

“Because they are the reason.”

No speech followed.

No grand philosophy.

Only those five words.

Asterion never forgot them.

Not when armies marched.

Not when worlds burned.

Not even ten thousand years later.

For every empire he witnessed rise and fall…

He remembered that, in the beginning, the Emperor’s dream had not been built upon conquest.

It had been built upon ordinary people who had refused to surrender their humanity in a world that had forgotten its own. This is what the Emperor wants for humanity. The refusal to surrender

Not the need to fight, but the willingness to, paired with the capability.

Saving a people whom have forgotten they can save themselves is no easy task, the Emperor would soon come to realize this.

He, for a long time though, knew this to be a fact.

———

Chronicle IV

———

The Kingdoms of Ash

———

Old Terra possessed no single ruler.

Not anymore.

Its continents had splintered into thousands of dominions whose borders shifted with every passing season.

Kings crowned themselves beneath rusting satellites.

Warlords claimed ancient bunkers as palaces.

Priests ruled over cities built around machines whose purpose they no longer understood.

Each kingdom proclaimed itself the rightful heir to mankind.

Each looked upon its neighbors as enemies.

Each slowly consumed itself.

The Emperor never hurried through these lands.

To Asterion, this seemed curious.

The roads were dangerous.

Bandits haunted forgotten highways.

Mercenary companies sold their swords to whichever lord offered another meal.

Mutated beasts wandered forests reclaimed from abandoned industry.

Yet the Emperor walked as though time itself accompanied Him.

Neither hurried.

Neither delayed.

Only observed.

On the twenty-first day of their journey, they reached the outskirts of a city whose walls had once belonged to an age so ancient that even its foundations defied memory.

The gates stood open.

Not from welcome.

From neglect.

Within the walls, thousands still lived.

Market stalls crowded cracked avenues.

Smoke drifted from crude chimneys fashioned from the remnants of shattered manufactorums.

Children darted between carts while merchants shouted over one another in voices hoarse from years of survival.

Life endured.

It always did.

The people noticed the two travelers.

Some watched with suspicion.

Others with indifference.

Few offered greeting.

Hope had become expensive upon Old Terra.

Trust even more so.

A young boy hurried past carrying a basket nearly too large for his arms.

He stumbled.

The basket overturned.

Small metal cylinders scattered across the roadway.

The child froze.

Several adults looked away.

One merchant cursed the delay.

Without a word, the Emperor knelt.

He gathered each cylinder carefully before placing them once more into the basket.

The boy stared.

“You don’t have to.”

“I know.”

The Emperor smiled.

“But I wished to.”

The child hesitated before accepting the basket.

“…Thank you.”

Then he disappeared into the crowd.

Asterion watched until the boy vanished from sight.

Afterward, he asked,

“Why did You stop?”

The Emperor continued walking.

“Because one day…”

“…someone must stop for another.”

Nothing more was said.

Near the city’s center stood a great tower.

Its upper levels had collapsed centuries before.

Its lower halls now sheltered hundreds who possessed nowhere else to go.

There, an elderly physician worked among rows of simple cots.

His medicines were few.

His tools worn nearly beyond use.

Still…

He tended every patient with the same patience.

The Emperor remained beside him for hours.

Grinding herbs.

Boiling water.

Binding wounds.

The physician assumed Him another traveler.

He never asked His name.

When evening came, the old man bowed his head.

“I cannot repay you.”

“You already have.”

The physician frowned.

“I have?”

The Emperor nodded toward the sleeping patients.

“They will awaken tomorrow.”

The old man smiled.

“I suppose they will.”

That night, Asterion finally voiced a question that had grown heavier with every passing mile.

“You could have healed them all.”

“I could.”

“You could have repaired their machines.”

“I could.”

“You could have ended their hunger.”

“I could.”

The fire crackled softly between them.

“Then why did You not?”

For a long while, only the wind answered.

Finally, the Emperor spoke.

“If I solve every problem…”

“…they will learn nothing.”

Asterion remained silent.

The Emperor lifted another piece of wood onto the fire.

“If I teach one physician…”

“…he may heal thousands.”

“If I simply heal the thousands myself…”

“…what becomes of the next generation?”

The flames danced between them.

“The purpose is not to save mankind from every hardship.”

“It is to ensure mankind no longer requires saving.”

Days became weeks.

Weeks became months.

The roads carried them through kingdoms that differed greatly in appearance yet little in spirit.

One city worshipped engines.

Another outlawed every machine more complex than a water wheel.

One ruler proclaimed himself the last true Emperor of Terra.

Another insisted no emperor should ever exist again.

Each believed certainty belonged only to themselves.

The Emperor listened more than He spoke.

Asterion remembered more than he questioned.

Then, upon the edge of a wind-scoured plateau, they came upon a battlefield.

No armies remained.

Only silence.

Broken banners fluttered weakly among rusting armor.

The dead had long since returned to the earth.

Grass grew between shattered weapons.

Rain had washed away the blood generations earlier.

Only absence remained.

Asterion surveyed the field.

“They fought for this?”

The Emperor nodded.

“For generations.”

“What did they gain?”

The Emperor looked across the endless plain.

“The right…”

“…to inherit ruins.”

The wind carried His words away.

Neither moved for some time.

Then, without another sentence…

They continued walking, or there were still kingdoms left to see, and lessons yet to learn.
Chronicle V

———

The Cost of Waiting

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As autumn settled across the northern plains of Old Terra, the road carried them toward a settlement nestled between weathered hills.

Long before its walls came into view…

They saw the smoke.

Not the gentle columns rising from cookfires.

These climbed dark into the heavens.

Heavy.

Restless.

Wrong.

The Emperor stopped.

For the first time since leaving the Himalazia…

His pace quickened.

The village had already fallen.

Homes still burned.

Wagons lay overturned where families had attempted to flee.

Tools and children’s toys lay scattered among the mud as though abandoned in desperate haste.

The cries had ended.

Only the crackling of fire remained.

Asterion moved through the ruins with measured purpose.

He found survivors where walls had shielded them from the worst of the violence.

An old man clutching his grandson.

A woman whose arm had been broken while protecting her daughter.

Three children hidden beneath a collapsed cellar door.

The Emperor knelt beside each without distinction.

He bound wounds.

Lifted fallen beams.

Spoke softly to those who still possessed the strength to listen.

Yet for every life He saved…

Another had already been lost.

By nightfall the fires had been extinguished.

The survivors gathered in silence beneath a sky veiled by smoke.

No one asked who the two strangers were.

Grief had stripped away curiosity.

One elderly farmer eventually broke the silence.

“They came from the east.”

The Emperor nodded.

“We know.”

“There were perhaps fifty of them.”

Again, the Emperor nodded.

“They took our grain.”

“Our livestock.”

“Our sons.”

His voice faltered.

“They’ll return.”

The Emperor looked toward the eastern horizon.

“Not here.”

The old man believed Him.

He did not know why.

Before dawn, the Emperor and Asterion departed.

No promises were made.

None were needed.

By sunset, the raiders had been found.

The confrontation was brief.

Steel answered steel.

The innocent were released.

The captives returned.

Those who had chosen cruelty met the justice they had long escaped.

When the Emperor and Asterion escorted the rescued villagers home, hope returned with them.

Children laughed once more.

Fields were planted again.

Homes rebuilt.

For a season…

Life endured.

Winter passed.

Then spring.

The road called them onward.

There were always more people in need.

Always another kingdom.

Another valley.

Another fire upon the horizon.

Nearly a year later…

They returned.

The village was gone.

Not damaged.

Gone.

The earth had been blackened.

The wells filled with stone.

Fruit trees cut down where they stood.

Even the foundations had been broken apart.

Only the wind remained to remember that people had once lived there.

Asterion searched the ruins.

He recognized the physician’s walking stick.

The child’s carved wooden horse.

The old farmer’s iron plow, twisted by flame.

He remembered every face.

Every name.

Every voice.

None remained.

For a long while…

Neither he nor the Emperor spoke.

At last Asterion broke the silence.

“We saved them.”

“We did.”

“They still died.”

“Yes.”

Asterion looked across the empty valley.

“We were too late.”

The Emperor’s gaze never left the horizon.

“No.”

His voice was quiet.

“We were too few.”

Those words lingered between them.

Asterion understood.

No strength, however great…

No wisdom, however vast…

No compassion, however sincere…

Could carry the burden of all mankind upon two pairs of shoulders.

The world was simply too broken.

Too vast.

Too wounded.

That evening they made camp upon a ridge overlooking the ruined valley.

The fire burned low.

For the first time since Asterion’s creation…

The Emperor appeared tired.

Not in body.

In spirit.

He watched the distant darkness where a village had once stood.

Finally He spoke.

“I cannot remain in every village.”

“No.”

“I cannot walk every road.”

“No.”

“I cannot stand between every child and every sword.”

The silence that followed seemed endless.

Then…

Almost as though speaking to Himself…

“There must be more.”

The fire crackled softly.

Asterion said nothing.

He did not yet know what form that thought would take.

But somewhere beneath the Himalazia…

Ancient laboratories waited in darkness.

Soon…

Their silence would end.

Soon…

The sparks of life created will illuminate the once slumbering halls beneath Himalazia.

Soon…Thunder would echo its mighty heartbeat…


r/WarhammerFanFiction 17h ago

Discussion [30k] How horrifying is the power to see the fourth wall in 30k realizing you and others are all fiction?

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"Everything is preordained, even my responses. We're all puppets, Laurie. I'm just a puppet who can see the strings." Quote by Dr Manhatten.

I had this plot bunny that I had where instead of it being comedic like Gintama, Harley Quinn, or Deadpool in fourth wall breaks. Where instead of being funny, you become aware that you’re fiction in this grim dark galaxy.

So basically in this AU Perturabo had this power where instead of just seeing the weaknesses of everything, Perturabo actually had the power to see the fourth wall ever since he was a child in Olympia! By the time Perturabo is found and geneseed given, many if not most had the power to see the fourth wall like Perturabo did.

Perturabo saw the rulebook of tabletop, as many things in war are based on chance with dice and their mechanics in tabletop.

Perturabo and most his sons read their own articles online, alongside seeing the official Warhammer website of future events. Even ignoring the Warhammer website, they saw TV tropes, and YouTube analyses.

They see dialogue boxes on top of everyone where they realize if they said this or that, the dialogue box shows that’s how other person would react and respond.

Perturabo sees the black library authors in England writing the books, in tandem with him seeing how the warp is used to justify bullshit deus ex machina and plot holes.  

Perturabo sees himself and his sons, almost everyone is nothing but fake painted miniatures.  

Perturabo learning why primarchs didn’t appear in 40k until the daemon primarchs, Lion, and Guilliman was due to needing to release future models and rulebooks compared to their 30k figurines.

Perturabo seeing that grim dark is nothing more than an aesthetic as there is no hope for a better future!!!  

The emperor is purposefully written like a terrible father, and various tropes so the heresy and grim dark things will happen. His power level is all over the place was needing drama in the books.

Perturabo seeing that the emperor is a powerful plot device, and knowing the two missing primarchs!

There is no hope as the heresy even if Horus didn’t fall will happen, because of so much cosmic bullshit which means any primarch can become the arch heretic just so the grim dark of 40k will happen. With Perturabo seeing alternate universes and fanfiction of the Dornian heresy, Roboutian heresy, Lion Heresy, and the Sanguinius heresy.

Hope and free will being a lie when you realize your fiction as you see the strings upon others as they’re fictional NPC’s.

Note:

So far I’m not planning on a Perturabo pov rather how everyone reacts and deals with Perturabo and his sons who are acting this way, and the massive divergence of this AU since the great crusade, relationships, and heresy if it were to happen will be different.

It absolutely won’t follow canon, but it’ll become clear that to the readers sans everyone else that Perturabo is extremely damaged as he sees this alternate universe he’s from literally write around him.


r/WarhammerFanFiction 2d ago

Discussion Fics that I wish were continued in [40k]

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One of my favorite fics was never completed and I sometimes wish I knew what happened to that author posted link to fic in comment

If anyone wants to chat about there favorites they can join my other Reddit post linked in a comment


r/WarhammerFanFiction 2d ago

Self-Promotion [40K] Edge of the Void - Campaign Turn 7

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The next chapter of my Five Parsecs from Home campaign is here.


r/WarhammerFanFiction 3d ago

Discussion [Fantasy] discussion

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I’m working on a novel, my OC is Asterion, he is the emperors first successful attempt at a “super human” and would later become the blueprint for the custodes.

Not some flashy character that’s meant for lore breaking campaigns, just a silent observer, the one whom has seen and remembers everything, even about the emperor. He’s seen the entirety of the imperium to this point.

Does this sound interesting to anyone?


r/WarhammerFanFiction 6d ago

Discussion [40k] Could a Chaos Warlord like this fit into Warhammer 40,000? Should the Ghoul Stars receive a major narrative campaign?

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Since getting into the Warhammer 40,000 hobby and its lore, I've spent nearly two years writing a complete fan novel centered on an original Chaos Space Marine warlord set almost entirely within the Ghoul Stars. Now that the manuscript is finished, I've been wondering whether a character like this could plausibly exist within established 40k lore, so I wanted to ask the wider community what they think.

The central character is Vargrav Angelsbane, an ancient Chaos Lord who abandoned the traditional cycle of endless raiding in favor of spending millennia building a hidden empire within the Ghoul Stars. While he serves Chaos, he is defined less by religious fanaticism and more by long-term strategy, logistics, siege warfare, industrialization, and empire building. Rather than pursuing glory through constant warfare, his campaigns focus on conquering and sustaining worlds, rebuilding fleets, forging alliances with the Dark Mechanicum, and creating a self-sufficient civilization beyond the Imperium's reach.

I chose the Ghoul Stars as the setting because Games Workshop has intentionally left much of the region unexplored. Between the Halo Stars, mysterious xenos civilizations, forgotten human worlds, strange warp phenomena, and countless unanswered mysteries, it feels like one of the last places in the galaxy where an independent Chaos empire could plausibly remain hidden for millennia. That uncertainty also let me explore whether a self-sustaining Chaos civilization could realistically exist without contradicting established lore.

So my questions are:

  • Does a Chaos Lord focused on long-term empire building rather than constant conquest feel believable within 40k?
  • Would you find a major Chaos power hidden in the Ghoul Stars interesting, or would it feel out of place?
  • More broadly, do you think the Ghoul Stars deserve a dedicated campaign book, novel series, or large-scale narrative event similar to the Badab War, the Sabbat Worlds, or the Charadon campaigns?

I'm genuinely interested in hearing different opinions, whether you think the concept or the pitch works, doesn't fit established lore, or could be improved.


r/WarhammerFanFiction 7d ago

Other [40k] does anyone still have access to bloodied but unbroken?

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About a year ago I came across a series of five fics written by an author known as Phsntomstag458 that centred around James Larn, the protagonist of the story 15 hours, and a mysterious Aeldari by the name of Izuru Numerial. It was one of the best, if not the best, fics I've ever read. But it was long. I mean really long. It took me a good bit to read. A couple months ago I'd finally gotten to the fifth fic before I forgot about it for a while. Today I went to read it but I couldn't find it, because he's removed all his works from his account. I still have the first four downloaded but I never downloaded the fifth. Does anyone have access to it? Does anyone know why he removed his stuff? And on the nonexistent off chance that you see this Phantomstag, you truly wrote a masterpiece.


r/WarhammerFanFiction 7d ago

Request [40k] Looking for smaller scale fics with a focus on romance

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I know this isn't something much of the fandom is especially into, but I love romance as a vehicle for character + world exploration. Is there much out there for people to recommend? Preferably no big named characters or GRAND STAKES, just small time characters in the 40k universe trying to live their lives.

Any faction.


r/WarhammerFanFiction 7d ago

Discussion [Fantasy] Reverse Corruption Fic - Pick over the idea?

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I'd started tapping away at an idea after the first time I ever played Belegar. The overall idea was that instead of the End Times, the Order factions all fell to some kind of corruption, while many Darktide factions wound up becoming the good guys in some way.

It started with Belegar killing Queek Headtaker, taking Eight Peaks, and exterminating the Skaven at scale, while sealing away as much Warpstone as they could, leading to the unthinkable: Uncorrupted Skaven. I didn't write much, but it was mostly a scene of one of Queek's children lamenting what they could have been, and commenting that Belegar's victory had corrupted him.

Belegar had sacrificed everything to retake Eight-Peaks and drove off Chaos, but had, himself, become corrupted to 'unite' the Dwarf-Realms. Queek's son decided to save the world by taking him out with Ikit Klaw's last bomb.

That's where I left it off, but I never shared it with anyone and was wondering if anyone might be interested in the concept. I know "Good Skaven" is kind of a taboo thing in the Warhammer community but I'm not a grognard and the fact that it's not easy for them was the whole point of where it was going.

Belegar's victory cost the world everything. The Empire was in ruins, the Dwarf-Realms were held together only by Belegar's tyrannical court, and basically everything was worse and not getting better. The Gods weren't listening anymore, so it was up to the Mortals to fix it.

One idea I toyed with is the idea that this version of the Old World was abandoned by all the Gods as a result, but the corruption and Daemons were still around. It was up to the descendants of all the heroes and villains to rebuild a world they could live in.

  • Dwarfs are on the edge of extinction after throwing everything into Belegar's wars
  • Humans are competing with Beastmen for the ruins of the Empire, creating genocidal bands of men going around exterminating them, while the Beastmen are struggling to fend off Daemons
  • What's left of the Undead create fortresses and have a toxic protectiveness of their mortal peasant populations they need to feed and reproduce
  • Dark Elfs, High Elfs, and Wood Elfs are wondering why they're bothering with the old ties and titles of nobility, considering they're now in the same boat as Dwarfs
  • Corrupted Skaven are still out there, enslaving uncorrupted Skaven (known as the Meek) and hoarding Warpstone for their chieftains and sorcerors
  • The Meek are being exterminated and enslaved by everyone, while they are just trying to figure out how to stitch together something like a society when they reproduce like crazy
  • The Lizardmen realize the quality of their spawn pools are declining, so they're attempting to reverse-engineer the process.
  • The Lizardmen's first 'success' is in 'completing' the Ogres, leading to a generation of Ogres able to control their appetites, which leads them to being eaten or kicked out of their tribes. Said Ogres are still able to eat anything. Including...
  • All kinds of spirits and Daemons are desperate for whatever sources of magic they can get their hands on, so what's left are trying to 'manifest' into semi-mortal descendants.
  • Norscans getting pushed out of Norsca and what had been the Chaos Wastes by resurgent populations of older races
  • Da Orkz is still around krumpin' everfing, dey just ain't got dem big ole Orks anymore. Dat's fine, just means more fightin' an' teef fer da rest of us, right boyz?
  • Boiz?
  • Zoggit, where're all da boyz? All I's got is a coupla goblins! I guess dat just means I's da biggest, meanest, greenest Ork around!

Everyone is on some kind of timer. Dwarf-holds are getting overrun by populations of Meek, who are keenly aware of their ability to devour everything even without the influence of warpstone. I'm particularly keen on these guys, honestly - Skaven who are stuck between just trying to survive and trying to make up for what they've done and what they are.


r/WarhammerFanFiction 9d ago

Self-Promotion [Fantasy] Update from previous post: Warhammer Fantasy X Fallout: ERX (Gate anime INSPIRED crossover) Chapter 1. Moving to AO3 later.

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First off, that pic is ABSOLUTELY not mine and I do not take credit for any of it. Credit link here(as well as many more materpieces by people with more artistic skill than I could ever hope for): https://www.reddit.com/r/OWBEnclave/s/I8Nb282pM4

As for this post, this is my second post of this story and my prologue post is here: https://www.reddit.com/r/WarhammerFanFiction/s/fPzbzpQhyD

If you have ever watched or read Gate then this chapter makes it stupid obvious how that series inspired this story I am writing and specifically this chapter.

I will be making a proper AO3 submission for this story in a few weeks. I will post the link in the comments of this post and my original post when I do make the story. Also I am considering actually just merging this chapter with the prologue for my final draft but haven't decided yet. Enjoy!

CHAPTER 1: THE DRUCHII RECONNAISSANCE 

The Mires of Landfall 

The gray, muggy fog of what should have been the Marienburg wasteland clung tightly to the obsidian-reinforced hull of the Crimson Tribute. Fleetmaster Vaelis stood on the high quarterdeck. He watched five thousand cold, lethal Druchii blades march inland in perfect silence. Their dark metal armor clinked faintly over the muddy marshland tracks. 

The Witch King’s decree had been absolute. This was a test of the Lustrian ritual. There would be no early raiding, no plundering of the local human merchant villages, and no accidental alarms to ruin the surprise. 

For three agonizing days, the vanguard had sat in their hidden base camp, stewing in sheer, unadulterated boredom. They watched the vulnerable human cattle of the nearby provinces go about their daily routines, completely unaware of the black knives hovering at their throats. The sailors remained at the hidden docks, checking and rechecking their rigging. They awaited the singular moment contact would be established with the capital. 

Finally, the designated hour arrived. 

The sky above the ritual site darkened, mirroring the exact cosmic alignment taking place thousands of leagues away in Naggarond. Sorceress Lysandra stood at the center of the camp, her dark robes snapping violently against a sudden, localized wind. Her pale fingers gripped her iron staff as she began chanting the ancient verses of binding and folding. 

Right on schedule, the Dhar began to pool. 

Swirling dark magic gathered around the ritual clearing, condensing into a dense, purple-black fog that hissed against the damp earth. The ground trembled. Massive pillars of jagged stone and arcane energy fused together, twisting and warping reality until a massive, stable Vortex Gate sat pulsing before the expedition. It was beautiful. It was flawless. 

Vaelis’s face split into a wide, predatory grin. He turned to his assembled warriors, his voice cutting through the damp fog with arrogant triumph. 

"Behold the supremacy of the Druchii!" Vaelis roared, gesturing to the gateway. "The oceans belong to our Arks, but the world now belongs to our stride! Stand ready, blades of Naggarond! Await the arrival of the Witch King’s personal legion, and we shall turn this entire human mire into a slaughterhouse of gold and screaming flesh!" 

The five thousand dark elves raised their serrated spears, their silent anticipation thick enough to choke the air. 

And they waited. 

A minute passed. Then five. The purple-black energies of the vortex rippled smoothly, humming with absolute, perfect stability, but no one stepped out. The great, terrifying silhouettes of Malekith’s personal guard were entirely absent. There were no marching drums, no heavy iron boots, and no sound of an approaching host. 

The fleetmaster’s grin slowly faded into a cold, hard line. Confusion rippled through the ranks of the vanguard. Vaelis gripped the hilt of his cutlass, his mind racing through the impossible variables. The Witch King did not delay. The master of Naggaroth was a creature of flawless discipline; he would not waste a synchronized cosmic window unless something had gone catastrophically wrong on the other side of the ocean. 

"Shades!" Vaelis snapped, waving a hand toward his elite scouts. "Step through the threshold. Ascertain why our kin linger in the capital's courtyard. Move!" 

Three slender, leather-clad Shade scouts melted out of the formation. They advanced with their repeating crossbows raised, stepping cautiously into the rippling vertical pool of the Vortex Gate. Their forms dissolved into the purple light. 

Vaelis tapped his fingers against his belt, counting the seconds. 

Less than two minutes later, the vertical pool rippled again. The three Shades stumbled backward out of the gate, their boots splashing into the Marienburg mud. Their sharp, angular faces were completely drained of color, twisted into expressions of absolute, bewildered incomprehension. 

"Report!" Vaelis demanded, stepping down from the dais. "Did the capital suffer a backfire? Does the Black Tower stand?" 

The lead Shade swallowed hard, his eyes darting frantically between the Fleetmaster and the pulsing portal. "My Lord... there are no black spires. There is no cold, biting wind of Naggaroth. There is no royal army waiting for our signal." 

"Then what lies beyond the threshold?!" Vaelis roared. 

"A forest, Fleetmaster," the scout stammered, shaking his head. "Just... an unassuming, dense and green forest. Trees on all sides, stretching as far as the eye can see. The temperature is mild. The air smells of strange, alien pine. There is nothing there." 

Vaelis froze. He stood stunned, his mind refusing to process the sheer absurdity of the report. A forest? They had opened a direct, dual-synchronized tear across the world to the heart of their home continent, and it had yielded nothing but trees? 

Slowly, the fleetmaster turned his head toward his sister. 

Lysandra stood near the ritual circle. Her pale face was fixed with a highly specific expression—one Vaelis had seen on her many times throughout their centuries of sibling rivalry. She looked entirely surprised by the specific outcome, but she was not shocked by the concept of failure itself. 

She had hidden something from him. Again. 

"In the tent," Vaelis whispered, his voice a low, venomous hiss that promised an agonizing death. "Now." 

The heavy velvet flap of the command tent had barely swung shut before Vaelis’s iron gauntlet slammed into the wooden support pole, his face inches from his sister's. His eyes blazed with a frantic, lethal desperation. 

"You sniveling, incompetent wench!" Vaelis snarled, his hand hovering dangerously close to his cutlass. "The Witch King’s executioners are already sharpening their halberds for my neck! If this portal does not deliver his legions, we are dead by our return to Naggaroth! What did you do to the translation?!" 

Lysandra did not flinch, though her hands trembled. She stepped back, drawing herself up with the defensive pride of a Sorceress of the Convent. 

"I did nothing to the translation, brother," she replied, her voice a forced, trembling silk. "The syllables were perfect. The alignment was precise to the millisecond. The magic flowed exactly as the Lustrian tome directed." 

"Then why am I looking at a nameless wilderness instead of the Black Court?!" 

Lysandra closed her eyes, taking a sharp, unsteady breath. The terrifying truth could no longer be omitted. "Because the tome... the artifact we wrested from the jungle canopy... it was not forged by the foolish humans of the Old World. Its geometric patterns, its hidden folding verses... it is of Tzeentchian design." 

Vaelis’s breath hitched in his throat. The name of the Changer of Ways struck a cold, immediate spike of dread into his chest. "Chaos magic," he whispered, his voice cracking with sudden horror. "You gambled our lives on a pact with the Architect of Deceit?" 

"I believed I could control the architecture of the spell!" Lysandra hissed back, her eyes snapping open. "I omitted the final passages from my report to the Witch King because I knew he would deny us our glory if he suspected the ruinous taint! But there are no multi-colored warp-storms outside, Vaelis. No daemons are pouring through the tear to harvest our souls. The Changer did not execute a grand, cataclysmic ambush." 

"Then what did he do?!" 

"He lied," she whispered, her shoulders slumping. "Change for change's sake. A cosmic joke born of pure, chaotic whim. He took our perfect, synchronized locking system and spun the needle across reality just to see where it would land. We are tethered somewhere else entirely. Another spot in the world, a mirror dimension, or another world entirely. Maybe even the Realm of Chaos itself, I know not for sure" 

Vaelis felt the room spin. He was a dead man. If he returned to Naggarond to tell Malekith that they had failed because his sister had hidden a Tzeentchian curse within their grand invasion plan, the Witch King would peel the flesh from their bones over a thousand years. But right now, the portal was stable, the vanguard was waiting, and the cosmic tear was wide open. He needed to salvage the situation.  

He needed a prize. 

"Bring the scout captains inside!" Vaelis ordered, his voice shifting from panicked rage to cold, calculating focus. 

A moment later, the lead Shade scouts slipped into the tent, moving like shadows against the heavy velvet drapery. Vaelis did not mince words. He laid bare the nightmare of their situation, locking his predatory glare onto each of them. 

"The gate did not open to Naggaroth," the fleetmaster growled, pointing a rigid finger back toward the swirling purple light outside. "My sister's ambition has blinded her to a Tzeentchian trick hidden within the Lustrian text. We have been subjected to a cosmic joke by the Architect of Deceit. We are currently tethered somewhere else entirely—an unknown place, or perhaps an entirely different reality." 

The Shades shifted, their dark eyes widening slightly as the horrific weight of the Chaos curse registered. Vaelis stepped closer, his voice dropping into a low, venomous command. 

"We cannot close this gate empty-handed," Vaelis warned. "If we return to the Witch King with nothing but a tale of chaotic whim, the executioners will have all our heads. If this chaotic roulette wheel has thrown us into an unknown world, then it must contain something of value. Ruined kingdoms, lost artifacts, rare beasts... anything I can drag back to the feet of Malekith to soothe his fury and justify this madness." 

He stepped past them, throwing open the velvet tent flap and gesturing out into the gray Marienburg fog. 

"Take two full hunting parties and march straight through that portal," the fleetmaster commanded the captains. "Execute a wide reconnaissance sweep through that forest. Now that you know the nature of this Changer's gamble, look for any signs of who or what holds this land. Do not engage any local fauna unless provoked. Find something of worth. Find cities, find outposts, find wealth, or find blood. If there is a civilization on the other side of that dirt, I want to know exactly how hard they bleed!" 

The Shades nodded silently, their dark cloaks billowing behind them as they turned and sprinted toward the gate. Fully briefed on the Tzeentchian anomalies they might face, they vanished into the purple light, entering the deep canopy of the foreign forest. 

Cosmic Aftershocks 

Minutes earlier: 

Across the fabric of space and reality, on the other side of where the spatial tear would form, a calm morning in the deep pine forests took a sudden, bizarre turn. The sky over the quiet wilderness darkened as a strange, localized atmospheric disturbance began swirling above the thick canopy. 

It slowly built up in intensity, gathering heavy, static-charged currents across the landscape. The unnatural pressure concentrated tightly on a single, isolated clearing deep within the forest grounds. 

The local fauna immediately sensed the wrongness in the air. Driven into a sudden, panicked frenzy, flocks of birds erupted from the branches, and mutated wildlife scattered in multiple directions to distance themselves from the epicentre. 

Then, all at once, the atmospheric storm stopped. A heavy, absolute silence slammed down over the woods as the spatial pocket stabilized. 

All the while, the automated EPA sensor network did exactly what it was engineered to do. Data tracking the fleeing fauna and the massive, freak energy readings instantly transmitted back to the high-tech Environmental Observation Dome just northeast of it’s host town, Brewerton. 

Unfortunately for the people of the frontier town, this digital alert would not garner any swift military response. 

As far as the automated data matrix and the monitoring staff were concerned, the energy profile perfectly mirrored a rare, but not entirely unheard of, localized rad-storm anomaly. While such radioactive freak incidents had become increasingly rare over  years of continent-wide EPA terraforming and cleansing, legacy atmospheric pockets would still occasionally pop up and send environmental sensors into a temporary overdrive. 

The staff at the Dome had a strict, bureaucratic process for incidents like this. Given the scaled-back peacetime footprint of the sector and the lack of any hostile incursions, the tech team quietly logged the spike. They pushed their routine, physical inspection of the anomaly's grid coordinates further into the week while more pressing, high-priority ecological data sets were attended to. 

Minutes later, when the automated sub-surface radar picked up a cluster of fresh, fast-moving thermal signatures moving away from the focal point of the anomaly, the monitors had every logical reason to assume it was merely more of the local fauna having a delayed reaction to the storm's electromagnetic discharge. 

In the peaceful, complacent frontier of 2305, life went on for them... for now. But as the weaves of change continued to spin and dark forces began to encroach on their way of life, war would soon be upon the people of the reformed United States once again.

And war... war never changes.


r/WarhammerFanFiction 8d ago

Self-Promotion "She Dreams of Death", featuring the Prologue to a (completely written) first season I have yet to record (due to not having a good place to post this, cheers Megamind (no relation)) [40K]

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r/WarhammerFanFiction 9d ago

Looking For? [40k] grey knights and Aeldari cooperating

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Anyone know if any Fanfiction (or even actual books for that matter) where the Aeldari and the Grey knights cooperate? If there's none if those, I'll accept custodes instead. I like that kinda stuff.


r/WarhammerFanFiction 10d ago

Looking For? Any good SI [40k] fics you would recommend

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r/WarhammerFanFiction 10d ago

Discussion Which two primarchs are most shipped together? [30K] [40K]

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As the title says, which two primarchs are most often shipped together? It's got to be Corax + Guilliman right?


r/WarhammerFanFiction 12d ago

Lore The return of Sanguinius [40k]

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The Price of Gold and Crimson

The Reclusiam of the *Blade of Vengeance* was silent, save for the synchronous, jagged breathing of three hundred Space Marines.

They did not breathe to sustain life; they breathed to control the madness.

In the center of the chamber lay the Golden Sarcophagus, shattered open from the inside. And standing above it was a nightmare clad in the physical perfection of a angel. The Primarch Sanguinius had returned, but his skin was a bruised, translucent grey, clinging tightly to elongated bones. His magnificent wings were tattered, molting black feathers that dissolved into warp-smoke before hitting the stone floor.

He was breathing, but he was not whole. The entity that animated him was a howling vortex of pure, unadulterated trauma—the raw, psychic accumulation of ten thousand years of the Black Rage, the black angel clothed itself in a dead primarchs meat.

"Father?..." whispered a Battle-Brother of the First Company, his bolter lowering.

The entity in Sanguinius’s flesh screamed—a sound that shattered the reinforced stained glass of the chapel. Instantly, a third of the assembled Blood Angels dropped to their knees, their eyes rolling back as their minds snapped. The psychic feedback tore through their gene-seed, plunging them instantly into the delusion of the Siege of Terra, the black rage consuming them. They drew their combat blades, turning on their own brothers in a blind, rabid frenzy.

"Hold the line!" bellowed Chapter Master Dante. His voice, ancient and weary, cracked over the vox. "It is not him! Do not let the madness take you!"

The battle within the Reclusiam was a tragedy written in blood. A civil war fought in the dark. Dante parried a blow from a Death Company captain who had been his friend only moments prior, driving his power sword through the marine’s chest with a heavy heart.

Through the chaos, the shriveled Primarch moved like a specter of death, tearing through Terminator armor with bare, elongated claws. He was looking for something. He was looking for an end.

Dante leapt across the blood-slicked stone, his Jump Pack roaring. He slammed into the hollow chest of his Primarch, bringing them both crashing to the altar. The Axe of Mortalis swung, but Sanguinius caught the power weapon by the blade, the disruption field hissing against his pale skin.

The Primarch’s eyes were pitch black, leaking streams of dark Warp energy. He pinned Dante to the stone, a claw tightening around the Chapter Master’s throat. Dante’s armor buckled. His ribs cracked. For eleven hundred years, Dante had prayed for death. He had begged the Emperor for rest. "Finally," he thought.

Through the shattered ceiling of the chapel, a blinding radiance erupted.

A golden figure descended, wreathed in a halo of pure psychic light. The Sanguinor. The noble echo of the Great Angel’s soul materialized, dropping like a falling star into the back of the shriveled Primarchs husk.

A violent explosion of golden and black light threw Dante and space marines across the room.

When the dust settled, the rabid howling had stopped. The entity of the Black Rage and the spirit of the Sanguinor had fused within the vessel of flesh. His soul was whole again, but the body was ruined.

Sanguinius lay on the steps of the altar. He was shriveled, ancient, and weak—a dying old man trapped in a transhuman shell. The psychic shockwave had broken the madness of the surviving Blood Angels, leaving them weeping in the ruins of the chapel.

Dante dragged his broken body forward, his armor sparking, crawling up the steps until he knelt beside his gene-father.

Sanguinius turned his head. His eyes were no longer black; they were the brilliant, soulful blue of the legends. The darkness of the Black Rage had vanished, replaced by the deep, controlled hunger of the ancient Red Thirst. The memory of Horus's betrayal had finally been healed by the unity of his soul.

The Great Angel looked at his weary son. He saw the centuries of burdens etched into Dante’s face.

"I need you, my son. Your duty has finally come to its end. But i need you to serve once more " Sanguinius whispered, his voice like dry autumn leaves.

Dante looked at the frail primarch. The universe was bleeding. The Imperium was torn in half. The galaxy needed an Angel, and Dante was just a tired man. He closed his eyes, accepting his fate with the absolute nobility that had defined his long life.

"As always Father, I live to serve," Dante replied softly.

With steady hands, Dante pulled a combat blade from his belt. He did not hesitate. He drew the edge across his wrist.

He held his bleeding arm over the parched, pale lips of the Primarch.

The blood of the oldest living son poured into the mouth of the father. The effect was instantaneous and terrifying. As Sanguinius drank, his shriveled flesh began to expand. Muscle and sinew knitted together with supernatural speed. The grey pallor of his skin flushed with radiant life. His tattered wings unfurled, the feathers turning from a corrupted black to a brilliant, blinding, snow-white.

Sanguinius rose to his full, majestic height, a perfect, radiant demigod restored to his absolute prime.

In his arms rested the body of Dante. The blood loss, combined with a violent, overwhelming psychic blast that erupted from the Primarch’s total ascension had stopped the Chapter Master's heart. Dante’s eyes closed. The darkness took him and finally, he slept.

Two Hundred Years Later

The world of Baal Secundus had changed.

Deep within the fortress-monastery, in a chamber sealed by stasis fields, a pair of ancient eyes snapped open.

Dante gasped, drawing a frantic breath into lungs that had been dead for two centuries. He looked down at his hands. The scars on his wrists were gone. The constant, aching pain of his eleven-hundred-year-old body had vanished. The psychic backwash of a god’s rebirth had ignited something fundamental in his genetics. He was a Perpetual. He could not die.

A figure stepped out of the shadows. It was an Apothecary, but his power armor was heavily modified, adorned with brass piping and massive, automated bio-fluid vats mounted to his back.

"My Lord Dante," the Apothecary said, bowing low. "The Primarch said you would return to us."

Dante stood up, his mind reeling as he walked toward the viewport overlooking the fortress docks. What he saw froze the blood in his veins.

Massive civilian transport ships were lined up for miles. Millions of Imperial citizens stood in orderly, silent queues, guarded by Blood Angels. They were not being loaded onto ships. They were lining up at clinical extraction stations, passing their lifeblood into massive, armored logistics vats.

"What is this?" Dante whispered.

"The Blood Tithe, Commander," the Apothecary replied calmly. "When the Great Angel ascended, our Larraman cells mutated. We no longer heal naturally. A minor scratch will bleed until we die. But if we consume fresh blood, our wounds seal instantly."

The Apothecary gestured to the sky, where the glorious, white-winged form of Sanguinius could be seen flying among a fleet of golden gunships, preparing to launch a new crusade against a nearby Tyranid hive fleet.

"Against the soulless and the xenos, we must carry our own lifeline," the Apothecary continued, his tone chillingly bureaucratic. "The Apothecarion now manages the crimson reserves. We are more lethal than we have ever been. And our Angel lives"

Dante stared out at the millions of citizens bleeding for their saviors, then up at his flawless, radiant father. The sight lifted his soul and the millennia of struggle and pain seemed to not weigh as heavy on him anymore. The Angel lives.


r/WarhammerFanFiction 16d ago

Self-Promotion [Fantasy] My attempt to add fuel to the Fantasy v Modern fire and satisfy my desire to write a crossover that's been brewing in my mind: Warhammer Fantasy X ???????? (Gate INSPIRED crossover fic)

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My Original post in r/gate https://www.reddit.com/r/gate/s/JTzmediI2L

There's a lot of medieval/fantasy vs Modern army discourse on the Gate subreddit, be a shame if someone was writing a fanfic that totally doesn't add fuel to that fire (or maybe not). I was watching Gate once and was asking myself how can the Fantasy Vs Modern elements be turned up to 11? Then it hit me and now I'm writing a very Gate inspired (emphasis on INSPIRED because the actual Gate universe is not in the fic itself but the gate being the main plot device is still doing the driving here) that crosses over the High Fantasy setting of Warhammer Fantasy and the Sci-Fi universe of ??????(it's a secret for now). So I wanted to post my (simple and possibly not final draft) prologue of the fic here for critique and suggestions. Please enjoy, this is my first fic. Also I should note that I am using AI to assist with the writing as I am still new to all of this, so I'm using it in an "abuse goblin" sort of way where I use it bounce ideas and drafts back and forth. I'll stop when I can figure out my own writing style but if any AI use aggravates anyone I understand. I'm hoping that'll only be temporary until I get better at this.

Prologue 

The Black Court of Naggarond was a cavern of frozen shadow and jagged obsidian, illuminated only by the cold, dying glow of sacrificial braziers. At the far end of the hall sat the Witch King. Malekith the Eternal was a towering silhouette of absolute dread, encased in his suffocating armor of black iron, his breathing low and rhythmic behind his terrifying iron mask. 

Before his dais knelt two Dark Elves—the Druchii—who had traveled across the frozen reaches of Naggaroth to petition the throne. 

Admiral Vaelis of the Black Ark fleets stood with a cold, military poise, his hand resting casually on the hilt of his cruel, serrated cutlass. Unlike his peers, who measured their worth in the screaming masses of captured slaves, Vaelis had carved his reputation out of a different plunder: artifacts, lost treasures, and ancient relics. Beside him knelt his sister, Lysandra, a Sorceress of the Dark Convent, her pale skin contrasting sharply with her midnight-blue robes, her hands holding a heavy, leather-bound volume wrapped in rusted chains. 

"Speak, Admiral," the Witch King’s voice rattled through the iron grates of his helm, a deep, scraping tremor that made the executioners in the shadows tighten their grips on their halberds. "You have broken the protocol of my court to boast of a raid on the muddy shores of Lustria. My patience is short." 

Vaelis did not flinch. He bowed his head, his sharp, angular features twisting into a confident, predatory smile. "A routine raid, Dread King. We found an abandoned human encampment in the jungle canopy. Their allegiance was unknown—savages or fools from the Old World, left to rot in the swamps. But among their discarded crates, my sister unearthed a masterwork. A prize that makes a mockery of simple chattel." 

Vaelis stepped aside, giving the floor to Lysandra. In Naggaroth, magic was a dangerous, lethal tightrope; any male who practiced the art was hunted and executed to preserve the Witch King’s monopoly on the arcane. As a female of the Convent, Lysandra was legally permitted her power, but standing before the prime source of that law was an entirely different terror. 

She raised the arcane tome, her voice steady but laced with a dark, infectious excitement. "It is a spell of binding and folding, Great King. A ritual to conjure a Vortex Gate. If those proficient in the Winds of Magic fuel its core, it allows for the creation of two separate vortex portals, permanently tethered to one another, opened upon any two points of the world simultaneously." 

The silence in the Black Court stretched, thick and heavy. 

Malekith did not move, but the temperature in the room seemed to drop. The strategic advantage of such a spell was instantly obvious to the master of Naggaroth. A game-changer. For millennia, Druchii invasions and slave raids relied on the brutal, exhausting logistics of the great Black Arks traversing the treacherous oceans. With a Vortex Gate, the armies of Naggaroth could march straight out from the capital's obsidian gates and step onto the fertile, defenseless shores of the Old World or Cathay in an instant, plundering treasures and dragging hundreds of thousands of slaves back into their dark homeland without ever boarding a ship. It was almost a divine find. 

"A portal across space," Malekith mused, his iron gauntlet tapping a rhythmic, hollow scratch against the armrest of his throne. "And what is the catch, Sorceress? Magic of this magnitude is never free." 

Lysandra swallowed hard, pressing her knees deeper into the frozen stone floor. "There is... a flaw in the engineering of the ritual, Dread Lord. The spell cannot be cast from a single side. It requires the magic users to conjure the vortex layout at both intended locations across the world at the exact same moment. One cannot open the doorway without someone already holding the lock on the other side." 

The Witch King’s hand stopped tapping. He leaned forward, the shadows swirling around his jagged crown. He was not entirely put off by the flaw, but his enthusiasm vanished. He was a creature of absolute pragmatism; he would not commit his grand legions or risk his global campaigns on a spell that might fail due to a single miscalculated second or a dead ritualist across the sea. 

The dark master pondered, the cold intelligence behind his visor calculating the variables. 

"A test," Malekith finally decreed, his voice cutting through the hall like a winter wind. "We will not risk a grand offensive on a whisper of Lustrian parchment. We will test this spell in a small-scale environment before we plan anything greater. And I know precisely where to strike." 

The Witch King raised a finger, and a map of the Old World flickered in the dark braziers' smoke. 

"The Free City of Marienburg," Malekith rumbled. "Specifically, the outer marshy wastelands to the north. The region is a disjointed, poorly developed mire. It is lightly guarded, isolated from the city proper, and completely neglected by the neighboring provinces of the human Empire. If an anomaly occurs there, the local lords will spend weeks arguing over who should pay to investigate it." 

He looked down at the siblings. "Admiral Vaelis, you will take your raid fleet and a compact vanguard of five thousand Druchii warriors. You will sail across the sea, infiltrate the Marienburg wasteland, and establish the ritual site for the first gate. Simultaneously, the Sorceresses of Naggarond will prepare the matching site on the rocky outskirts of this capital." 

The Witch King rose from his throne, his terrifying silhouette filling the apex of the Black Court. "At the designated hour and day, the spell will be cast. If the vortex holds, and the gateway stabilizes, a secondary wave of ten thousand more Druchii will march straight through the portal from Naggarond to begin the total culling, enslaving, and plundering of that human mire." 

"By the time the human authorities realize a sudden Druchii legion is camped in their backyard," Vaelis added, picking up his master’s strategy with a sharp grin, "our vanguard and the reinforcements will have already marched back through the gate with their spoils, closing the tear behind them before a counterattack can even be organized. And my fleet can turn around the moment the rift opens and contact with the capital is confirmed." 

"Precisely," Malekith intoned. "Do not disappoint me, Vaelis. If your sister's spell fractures, or if you fail to hold your side of the dirt, you will find that the executioners of the Black Court are far less forgiving than the human guards of the Old World." 

Lysandra bowed until her forehead touched the ice. The exact day, the exact hour, and the precise arcane coordinates were locked into her mind. The decree was absolute. 

Within the hour, the Black Ark fleet would cast off from the frozen docks of Naggaroth, carrying five thousand dark blades into the foggy, forgotten marshes of the Marienburg wasteland, entirely unaware that the cosmic alignment of the spell would not slice a reality-shattering tear from the wastes to Naggarond but to somewhere else.

--Line Break--

On the high deck of his flagship, the Crimson Tribute, Admiral Vaelis leaned over the obsidian-reinforced railing, his dark eyes locked onto the churning grey waters of the Great Ocean. The cold sea spray bit at his face, but his expression was twisted into a wide, predatory grin. Weeks had bled into months since their departure from the frozen shipyards of Naggaroth, a brutal, grueling voyage across the unforgiving world. Now, roughly under two months into the voyage, the exhausting sea crossing was finally drawing near its end. The ships of his raiding fleet cut through the waves all around them, a sleek vanguard of five thousand black-bladed killers sailing toward the final leg of their journey: the foggy mires of the Marienburg wasteland.

"The political leverage alone will break our rivals, Lysandra," Vaelis purred, his voice laced with a frantic, sadistic glee. He turned to his sister, gesturing toward the horizon with a gloved hand. "Think of it! When that vortex stabilizes and ten thousand of the King's personal guard step out onto the shores of the Old World without losing a single day to the sea, the Black Court will belong to us. The riches we will siphon from those bloated human merchants... the armies the Witch King will place under my direct command... we will be untouchable." 

Lysandra stood completely still against the biting wind, her pale fingers gripping her iron staff so tightly her knuckles turned a stark, bloodless white. She looked at her brother, forcing a cold, submissive nod to match his ambitious fervor. "Yes, brother," she whispered, her voice a smooth, calculated silk. "Our names will ring through Naggarond." 

Vaelis laughed, a sharp, arrogant sound that carried over the snapping of the black sails, before turning back to shout orders at his deck-masters. He was entirely consumed by the intoxicating fantasy of their impending triumph, completely blind to the slight, icy pit that had just formed in his sister’s stomach. 

Underneath her heavy velvet sleeves, Lysandra’s hands began to tremble. Her brother was a brilliant sailor and a ruthless butcher, but he was entirely blind to the shifting, volatile nature of the arcane. And there was one other slight detail about that Lustrian tome—one final, cryptic passage buried at the very end of the ritual instructions—that she had conveniently forgot to bring up to her brother. Or to the Witch King himself. She had hidden it well, omitting the final verses from her translation to ensure Malekith would grant them their glory. But now, out on the open sea, the weight of what she had concealed began to settle heavily on her shoulders. She closed her eyes, offering a silent, desperate plea into the void. "Hekarti, Goddess of Magic, protect your servant... please do not let this backfire."

"Keep the speed steady!" Vaelis’s voice boomed from the quarterdeck, entirely unaware of the hidden variables his sister had introduced into the dark. "The human cattle will bleed by our hands before the week is out!" 

Lysandra watched the dark waters part beneath the ship's prow, keeping her terrifying secret locked deep within her chest as the Druchii fleet raced toward the coast of Marienburg’s wastes.


r/WarhammerFanFiction 28d ago

Looking For? [40K] I’m looking for I fanfic called Noblebright I think

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It was about the emperor of mankind getting a vision from his future self. He also changed the Primarchs genders. The fic is incomplete but the story is currently at the point where the Emperor is looking for the Primarchs but he already found some. I think it was on AO3


r/WarhammerFanFiction 28d ago

Prompt [40k] Crack: Ciaphus Cain and the 597th crash land on the world of Avatar: The Legend of Korra

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Cain, Jurgen and the 597th Valhallan Ice Warriors crash land on what appears to be a primitive early-industrial planet in the snowy mountains outside Republic City shortly before Avatar Korra arrives there (first episode of the series). Aside from the paranoia of the unknown they are facing, the most pressing problem for Cain is that they are almost out of tana tea. And so he and Jurgen set off to the city to find more.

Unbeknownst to the Commissar, his boss and occasional lover Inquisitor Amberley Vail of the Ordo Xenos has secretly attached a Callidus assassin to his company to keep him out of trouble. The assassin, disguising herself as an air acolyte, is somehow befriended by the Avatar and teaches her Callidus techniques to help unlock her air bending.


r/WarhammerFanFiction 29d ago

Self-Promotion [40K] Bite the Stars

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Hi!

This is Bite the Stars, a Warhammer 40K X Stray Cat Strut crossover fanfic. It's relatively new, but I'd still love to have more readers and eyes on it, especially those that know the deep old lore!

https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/bite-the-stars-warhammer-40k-x-stray-cat-strut.1314426/

The Broken Scale, a ship captained by a Rogue Trader delivering medicae and supplies around the Segmentum Solar has a literal run-in with a Protectorate AI, crashing into Vyper while within the warp.

Vyper, takes it upon themselves to assist humanity, regardless of whether they want it or not.

A cast of three characters, given Vanguard powers from the Stray Cat Strut universe, trying to survive genestealers, warp demons, and most of all, their own human allies long enough to bring order to at least one small corner of the galaxy.

Read if you want:

  • A happy ray-of-sunshine Admech girl whose friends are all servitors
  • A gremlin Sister Novitae passing herself off as a saint while turning battle hymns into nightcore
  • A serious, tactical-minded junior medicae, scheming and plotting her way to success

r/WarhammerFanFiction 29d ago

Other [40K] Rubble - A Short Story

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I finally tried my hand at writing a short story set in the 41st Millennium. I hope you enjoy this quick read.

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The hiss of lazfire was all the girl could hear in her ears as she cowered under what had been her shared bed only hours before. Occasionally, thumping bursts of bolter fire broke through, always followed shortly by the rattling of the house’s frame. Each time, the rattling only got stronger as the fighting approached. There was something else behind it all, too, a distorted screaming or thrumming moan. When the lazfire broke for a second, she could hear it more clearly and pressed her hands harder into her ears whenever she could. This didn’t seem to mute the noise in any meaningful way. 

After some hours lying in wait while the shouting cries from outside only got closer, the settled ash on the floor was finally disturbed. From just out of sight, the girl heard the front door crash open and boots pound their way inside. Through the open door, the bolter shots rang out even louder than before, and the girl winced at the wet sounds of impact as some must’ve found their mark just paces away from the nearest window. As the door shut again, five sets of boots tramped their way along the floor. The first one through made its way to the bedroom, the next couple flanked the limping fourth between them, and the fifth paced in short circles by the door, turning quickly and never staying still. 

“Throne damnit,” a mask-distorted voice came from the entryway. “They're everywhere. They're bloody everywhere.” The voice shook with adrenaline and exhaustion. “How are we meant to fight those… things. Throne above!”

“Sevan! You need to drop the self-pity and focus!” The voice closest to the girl shouted. Similarly distorted, the voice was still noticeably deeper, and the pacing boots stopped to turn towards its owner. “Miressa is injured, and we need you to set up the vox relay. Command needs to know this flank has been destroyed.”

“S-Sir, I…”

“You set up that vox, we can tell command to bring down artillery fire on this district, and we can go out taking hundreds of those bastards with us! You keep standing there, and they’ll burst through that door any minute. Tell me, soldier, which way would you rather go? Because there’s no cavalry coming to save us this time.”

The pacing boots snapped together with a click before they hurried out of sight. A better-polished pair of boots replaced them. Their owner, the girl, gathered from the fresh blood splatters along one side of the pants' legs, was one of the two assisting the wounded. 

“Sir,” a heavily accented woman’s voice came through a thick mask, “Miressa won’t make it. She’s lost too much blood already, and any more of our stimms might kill her outright.”

“Throne…” the deeper voice muttered. “How’s her good hand? Can she still hold a rifle?”

“Maybe a lazpistol, sir. I would doubt her aim with anything heavier right now.”

“That’ll have to do. Tell Coryx to set her up facing the door with her pilot aimed. If nothing else, we can give her a good death.”

Those polished, bloodstained boots snapped together, similar to the pacing boots from before, and hurried back the way they came. A minute or so later, the girl saw her father’s chair being dragged, led by a new, rugged pair of boots. They placed it just feet away from the front door, barely in view of the girl. Another minute passed, and the boots returned with a bloody pair limping at their side. 

“Right here, Miressa.” The voice sounded young. Without the distortion, the girl could’ve mistaken it for her own brother, just a handful of years older than herself. “Anything comes through, you give ‘em hell.”

As that voice helped his injured companion into the chair, raspy, pained breathing was amplified by the mask’s vox. A pained cough sounded clearly, and the next rasping breath was backed by a new gurgling. “Th-thank you, Coryx. I won’t go down without a fight.”

“You send them back to their dark masters, Miressa,” the deeper voice spoke back up, his boots pacing back over towards the entrance. 

“I will, Lieutenant Greyer,” Miressa said with all the strength still left in her. The girl heard drops of blood hitting the hard floor beneath where Miressa sat. The sound slowly grew into a small splash as a sizeable pool began to form. 

“Coryx! Check on Sevan. We need to vox command before we’re found.”

“Sir!” Coryx said proudly, leaving at a near sprint. 

“Bellea!” The lieutenant shouted. “With me, we need to barricade ourselves in.” The girl heard the splintering of wood, and the polished boots returned, dragging the broken floorboards behind them.

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Several long minutes passed, and the girl still remained unmoving and unseen. The house was filled with the sounds of nails being hammered into place, accompanied by growing shouts and cries from outside. One shout came loud from just beyond the front door, “Blood for th-!” The now too familiar cry was cut off by a loud bolter shot and its following explosion. 

“By the emperor!” Miressa cried, adjusting her posture with pain that was visible even to the girl. “Someone’s still out there.”

“Impossible, our whole squad was overrun. Who else could be out there? And with a bolter, no less.” Bellea’s question was answered as three strong knocks came to the girl’s front door. 

“This is Palatine Oreaus of the Bloody Rose.” Her voice rang out like an angel’s. “I saw a group of wounded enter this house not but five minutes ago. If you still live, we may yet be able to fall back to the front.”

Bella and the lieutenant quickly tore away their ramashakal defense and swung the door in. Large, crimson boots clanged loudly; the small whine of servos helping move the heavy power armor was audible between each footfall. 

“Palatine, Emperor be praised!” Bellea knelt before the sister. For the first time, the girl was given a good look at the soldier. Her armor glistened like her boots; shining metal scales covered her torso, and a full mask with a gleaming visor covered her face. 

The girl remembered when the Astra Militarum had first shown up. That was less than six months prior, but it had already felt like a lifetime. The Vitrian Dragoons. The name had sounded so regal back then, so unkillable. Fighting alongside the Sisters of Battle, the girl thought they must’ve been the toughest fighting force in the galaxy. Surely the small, rumored band of cultists, the next city over, would be no match for such an army. 

But the war had not ended so quickly. The girl remembered the face of her poor father when news of their neighboring town's fall reached their home. A few days after that, the girl hadn’t been able to sleep due to the new sounds of lazfire and screaming. She got used to it in time. Just the week before, the fighting had reached the girl’s neighborhood. Her mother and brother did not make it to the evacuation point alive, and her father’s dying action was simply returning her to their bombed husk of a home. 

There the girl stayed for two Terran days. She ate what little food was left quickly and finished off the water soon after. She hadn’t been brave enough to leave the house, not since that awful, thrumming noise started up the night prior. The girl shivered as the memory of the sound made it stand out that much more over the retreating sounds of war. 

“How many of you are there?” The imposing, yet reassuring voice of the Palatine asked. 

“Five, ma’am,” Lieutenant Greyer responded. “One badly injured. The other two are trying to get our vox relay back online. We were going to vox back to command to shell this district. At least that way we could take some of those damnable beasts with us.”

“There is no need for that transmission now,” Palatine Oreaus said with a grim chuckle. “They are already setting up for a barrage on the city in one hour. I can carry your injured, but we need to leave now.”

“Yes, ma’am. Coryx! Sevan! Belay that vox! Get down here, we’re leaving!” The lieutenant barked. The two men rejoined the others by the door. The boy caught their sharp gasps as they saw their new companion. 

“The Emperor protects!”

“Praise the Emperor, we may still get out of this.”

“Follow me,” the red armored sister said as she lifted Miressa, who let out a pained groan. “I have made a small break in the cultist’s masses. If we move fast, we should have enough of a start to make it back to the front, Emperor willing.”

The boots trekked out the same door they came in, and once again, the girl was alone. Glancing around the ruined room, she crawled out slowly from under the crushed bedframe. There were heavy bootprints left in the dirt and ash. They had kicked up so much of it that it strained her just to breathe. She peered out the open door and saw the small squad. They were heading west down a road that used to be filled every day with traffic and pedestrians. Now, all that filled it was wreckage and corpses. She saw grotesque idols lining the streets; skulls spiked upon large, crude banners. Her feet didn’t move as she tried to will himself out of the door, to follow her last hope of survival. The girl remembered her father’s cries as a cultist had driven a metal rod into his stomach. She remembered the look in that crazed man’s eyes. It had frozen her to the spot then as well. But as she watched the retreating backs of those soldiers of the Imperium, shooting into each alley they passed, putting down cultists with each shot, she also remembered her father’s last act. She saw her father once again as he pulled the rod from his own body and drove it like a stake through the heart of that vile heretic. 

The girl’s feet finally moved. She ran, sprinted for her life out onto the street. Stumbling over rubble and limbs, she ran. She dodged past blazing flames and the dying hands that grasped out at her ankles. She could no longer shut her ears against the pressure that was building in the air. That horrible thrumming screech was only growing louder and louder as she ran. The girl’s lungs burned from exertion and ash, but she wasn’t gaining on the squad at all. Their expert training and fully grown legs were far too fast. Even the heavily encumbered sister had the help of her servo-assisted armor to drive her forward. 

The girl shut her eyes against the sweat that was running into them and ran on. The pain in her legs, and now in her head too, was impossible to shut out. The screaming in her skull had grown impossibly loud. 

A few steps later, the girl’s next step did not find solid ground, and she was tumbling headfirst into a crater left by some detonated mine. Though she tried to stay silent, all too aware of the threats all around, she couldn’t fully stifle his cry of pain. Tears cut through the soot covering her face as the girl tried to struggle to her feet. As her eyes blinked open and tried to focus, the center of her vision was filled with red. 

The thrumming pounded in her skull at a fever pitch. She could hear nothing of the world around her but that incessant scream. It blurred her vision, and it took all her might just to focus on what she thought to be the source of this noise. 

Her eyes did focus. A horrid crimson beast stood over her, a cloven hoof pressed deep into the soil next to her. Its face was a twisted mask of rage. Two long horns curved up to the ashen sky, and a long tongue slithered from between its bloody teeth. The girl fumbled, and her hand found a rock next to where she had landed. She gripped it tightly, pulling her arm back and hurling it at the face of the creature. It made contact, but the daemon’s smile only grew. It raised its weapon. The spiked sword in its clawed grasp was poised to strike, but the creature would not get the chance. A bolter round struck it in the shoulder, then a second. They detonated in quick succession, and a quick burst of lazfire brought it to its knees. A last bolter shot struck the beast’s skull, and the red-skinned daemon was gone in a puff of dust and blood before the round had a chance to explode. 

The noise in the girl’s head died down, but didn’t completely vanish. A shadow fell over the girl, and she looked up to see one of the soldiers standing over her. “Come on, child! This is no place to die. We’re moving.” The lieutenant’s voice alone was enough to lift the girl to her feet, but his outstretched hand certainly helped too. 

“Where there is one of these beasts, there will be more. We cannot stay here long,” Palatine Oreaus stated. Her helmed gaze fell on the girl as they began to run again. “You were brave to stand up to an agent of the archenemy like that. You would be an asset to my Order.”

The girl was finally able to smile. It felt like ages since one had brightened her face. As she barely kept up with the running squad, her thoughts drifted elsewhere. To bright crimson boots of her own, driven forward by mechanical might. To a bolter of her own, so that she might be able to defend herself as well. And to those triumphant hymns she now heard the Palatine singing as they approached friendly lines. 

“Emperor be praised, the front!” Sevan shouted. “We made it. We bloody made it!”

The group was met with another squad, and medicae ready at hand. The girl was safe now, taken back to the civilian medical tent. But her mind was elsewhere. She was back out in the street, driving sword and blessed rounds into those who had made her scared. She secretly hoped, a vile thought she would never voice, that this war would last long. Just long enough for her to return to the front as a Sister of Battle herself and beat back the beasts.  


r/WarhammerFanFiction Jun 23 '26

Request [40K] genre breaking crossovers?

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Are there any crossover fics where a character that should not be in a grimdark franchise like Warhammer be placed in Warhammer?

Like: Kirby just showing up in the warp, Twilight sparkle appearing next to an eldar ship, or Arceus showing up on top of golden throne.

I just read An honest soul by Gers the destroyer so something like that with the characters having to face grimdarkness of the future but going through with their idealism somewhat intact.

Also did I go rule 2 correctly?


r/WarhammerFanFiction Jun 23 '26

Self-Promotion [fantasy] Hi everyone, I recently wrote up a Bretonnian Knight oc and wanted to share him with all of you! Hopefully this is alright to do in this subreddit. 😅

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Judicaël Suchet

'Treasure of the Sea Dragon'

Bretonnian Knight from Parravon

Born to a peasant family in the village of Rothenbourg, Judicaël was raised by his mother and older sister after his Carcassonnian father was killed whilst foraging in Athel Loren with his two sons. Suchet himself was returned to his mother in the Glade of Children while his brother, who had displayed an affinity for magic from an early age, was approached by the Fay Enchantress and never seen again. Once he reached adulthood, Judicaël moved to the neighbouring village of Vaudémont and was almost immediately chosen to rescue Lady Amelia Saint-Cyr, a Prophetess who had been imprisoned by Vaudémont's ruling baron. As a newcomer with no familial connections to the village, Suchet was seen as the most expendable option and was expected to fail like many had before him. Armed with nothing but his father's sword, Judicaël successfully infiltrated the baron's castle and freed the prophetess. Unwilling to let the baron continue his reign of terror, Lady Amelia used her astromancy to slay her captor and his minions. Suchet was able to convince the Prophetess to spare the baron's son and the two returned to Vaudémont, where Judicaël was made a Knight of the Realm for completing his quest but was not granted land due to his peasant background.

With no lands or wealth of his own, Sir Judicaël initially struggled to finance his knighthood. Luckily, the peasants of Rothenbourg and Vaudémont banded together to provide their new protector with a suit of armour fit for a knight of Bretonnia while local Dwarfs crafted a pair of mithril weapons for Suchet to wield. This generosity still left the knight without a mount but Sir Judicaël did not mind because he was secretly afraid of horses. As thanks for saving her life, Lady Amelia gave Suchet a Dawnstone pendant from the ancient city of Lybaras and helped the former peasant navigate the complexities of Bretonnian society. Suchet was shunned by many of his fellow knights but found a key ally in the Duke of Parravon after returning a stolen artefact to the Wood Elves of Tirsyth and destroying the Chaos Cult that had originally taken it.

After nearly a decade of protecting his fellow villagers and fighting wars for his duke, Sir Judicaël chose to take up the Questing Vow and prove himself to the Lady of the Lake. Suchet hoped to meet his Patron Goddess and ask her what had become of his brother, though he kept this desire to himself. Sir Judicaël travelled across the known world slaying monsters and defending the innocent, more focused on saving lives than winning the Lady's favour in most cases. The knight's travels eventually brought him to the Cathayan port city of Fu-Chow, where he became entangled with the Mistress of the Jade Sea herself. Suchet's quest came to an end when he slew a Chaos Lord riding a mighty Manticore in Beichai. Sir Judicaël then returned to Bretonnia and met with the Lady of the Lake, who revealed that the knight's brother was alive and serving her as a member of the Lost Sons. With his question answered, Suchet drank from the Holy Grail and became one of the legendary Grail Knights. A century later, Sir Judicaël would be reunited with his brother when the Lost Sons came to his aid during an apocalyptic Chaos invasion.