I've been learning high valyrian for only a little while, but I feel as though having a practice buddy could help a lot, i am only a beginner so if anyone is starting as well we could be of help to one another and if my buddy is already more knowledgeable I could learn a lot. ☺️

Hi! Could you please check the lullaby I wrote?

Zaldrīzesse ēdrusi.
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Qēlossi albie issi.
Se ñāqes tolmiot issa.

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Jaehosi ao amīsagi
Sīrgo ao kiragon.

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Hae zaldrīzesse ēdrusi.
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