Sorry I have to say things. Sort of spoilers ahead, you know the drill.
Pushing Ice is my first book by this author.
He built a beautiful stage, a wondrous structure. The world building is almost flawless. He deftly, expertly built us the Taj Mahaj, or the Colosseum, The Burj Khalifa, an exquisite towering and almost rudely proud, ornate opera house. A monument to science fiction.
...And then he takes you by the head and forces you onto your knees to watch two cockroaches or rats fighting on the front steps for hundreds of pages. Why? Nobody knows, but Alastair demands it.
The story follows the exploits of a crew of a space-miner ship, the 'Rockhopper', and her crew. Forced by circumstances to make a big decision, they get sucked into a spiral of more decisions, that puts their survival on the line. Confronted by crisis, and having to seek out the least worst options, can they survive the challenges around them as well as from within their own ranks?
Sounds promising right? Oh-ho-ho-ho-ho.
This almost verges on Off Armageddon Reef (David Weber) levels of awesome premise set-up that gets almost totally wasted.
"Please Mr Reynolds can I get up and look at this wondrous structure you have given us?"
"No, foolish reader, you must remain on your knees watching the repugnant mind-numbing conflict between two characters so badly written, so one-dimensional, so infuriatingly STUPID for no reason logical or human, that despite the wondrous structure before you, you are yearning to look up at and enjoy, you will always remember this experience for the misery of having been forced into the uncomfortable position of watching two vermin waste your time."
Why? Nobody knows. But you're going to watch. Alastair demands it.
Meanwhile every other character just sits around drooling from their little rodent/insect mouth parts. Does anyone else actually have a valid human opinion and input on this beyond moronic conflict? Does any other rat feel like intervening? Not a solitary roach wants to exploit this ongoing fool's conflict to insert themself into power with the promise of being slightly less insufferably stupid? Apparently not. No, apparently every other character exists purely to enable these two clowns to dance around each other for the entire book. It's Mean Girls but somehow dumber and with the background set-dressing of hard scifi.
"But Jerky, human conflict and drama is the heart of good story telling!"
Okay I'm just going to stop you there. Any Trek fans here recall how much flak captain Janeway got for her characterization, her actions sometimes? Yeah. These two characters from Pushing Ice make Janeway look positively competent and measured.
Which is sort of the point isn't it? To get the positions these two characters holds demands a certain level of intelligence and discipline. You don't get those positions by possessing the naivety and/or petulance of a toddler. And yet these character possess those qualities in spades. Meanwhile nobody ever really pulls them up on it. Nobody seemingly has any thoughts or feelings or opinions or ambitions at all it seems. Every other character could have died off on page 1 of the book and apparently would have made precisely 0 difference to the central conflict that the book and these two characters revolve around.
This book sets up lots of intrigue, literally gigantic science fiction mystery...and goes nowhere with it. Perhaps forgivable for the first in a series. As a stand alone? Unforgivable.
Nothing is really resolved. Neither the conflict between the two main characters, nor the mystery that has encompassed the (former) crew of the Rockhopper.
Forcing me to have to give even a solitary iota of [swear word] over whatever it is those two main characters want or think, despite them being in every WORST way imaginable, stupid and awful people, feels like a conscious insult on Mr Reynolds part to the readership. Only twisted into our guts by the fact the actual over-arching story never actually goes anywhere. I got halfway through before my frustration finally forced me to start skipping. The first half of the book DRAGS, and while the second half provides a bit more meat in terms of return on investment in the world, it never really goes anywhere that feels like a resolution. I'd make an analogy towards climax but with corporations like "DeepShaft" and substances like "Wangwood" I think crass allegory is already well-provisioned. Not the worst thing I've read, but frustrating all the same. He seriously need to work on his ability to write people, whether paragons of virtue and professional, academic, scientific competence, or as absolute degenerated and failed people prone to sabotage--both of themselves and everyone around them--in a far more believable manner.
While conflict and flawed people are great foils for story-telling, Mr Reynold's characterizations and writing are less like the first book in the ASOIAF series (A Game Of Thrones), and more like the abysmal writing of the scripts for the last season of the TV series based off of it. With the page-count this book has, and the wide cast of characters, it feels like they are completely wasted when there was plenty of word-count to give them fair characterization and arcs too. The alternative is that this book could have been a LOT shorter, with a lot of unnecessary filler removed, ESPECIALLY relating to the two main characters. Who frankly IMO need total rewrites anyway. I'm not sure what's more worrying. That this novel was released without editorial input, or that the book was released in tis state BECAUSE of editors. Neither is a reassuring thought.
Thanks Mr Reynolds. 5/10, hesitant to pick up any of your other works. Can't recommend to people that really hate the Stupid Ball and flip-floppy characters that aren't responding to conflict or creating it for logical human reasons, but because Author-san needs it at that very moment.