r/creativewriting 9h ago

Journaling Angry

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I did. I turned everything upside down and didn't think about the consequences until later. I had bottled up so much anger and resentment that I finally exploded. It felt good for a moment... then came the regret.

I couldn't take those words back, and I was left feeling both relieved and embarrassed.

Eventually, I managed to get my anger under control, and here you are, trying to see what you can do. The reaction you're looking for isn't there, and I hate to disappoint you.

Guess who's been applying the therapy lessons they've learned?

Me.


r/creativewriting 19h ago

Journaling Letters to Nate

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Note to Reader: I promised myself I would post these. Please be kind.

Friday, January 3rd, 2025. Letter I; Part Two

Our duet in the car on the ride back to the hotel is one of my favorite memories. I’m not sure why I was surprised that you were really singing. Looking back on our time in Korea, you were the first to sing and dance to any recognizable song. I think I was surprised that it was your real voice, that you wanted to sing unabashedly. And like hell was I going to let you sing by yourself.

I should have kissed you after that. The thought loomed in my mind but never haunted me. I regret not kissing you, but I’ll never regret taking my time with you. So, in a way, I’m fulfilled singing and dancing and cuddling with you. I know that you’ll always be here with me, not for my body. I just want you to know and feel the same way I do. You’re more to me than just a physique and our physical relationship. Why rush with someone who makes me feel like we have all the time in the world? And the rest of the time I’m not with you, I can feel the world nipping at my heels, hurrying.

I curse the time that went by and didn’t give us the same slow courtesy. I had a million questions to ask you about us. About where you wanted to go with our relationship? How do you really feel about long distance? Is it as hard for you as it is for me? So many friggin questions, and for all the nerves I felt at the airport, I had not one to spare to ask you any of these questions. As silly as it sounds, I didn’t feel like it was the right time to bombard you with relationship questions. Even though we were there, in Dallas, to not only see one another but to figure out our relationship…together.

I felt like I was raising these questions out of the blue, as if we hadn’t already talked about our crushes on each other or agreeing to talk as more than ‘just friends’. Despite feeling overwhelmingly shy around you, I cared deeply for how you think and will always listen to your feelings and opinions. I think it seared me a little how much it matters to me, taking me by surprise. It definitely scared me too. How much you mattered to me was scaring the logic and sense to the farthest corners of my mind.

So, I opted to continue our conversations: nothing too heavy, just trying to find out as much as I could about you without always asking deep, probing questions. The more we talked on our trip at the Zoo, walking the downtown memorials, and slowly along the riverwalk, the more I could bring up what I could. Talking with you about anything because you’re not someone I wanted to be shy with.

I’d be lying if I said I didn’t see glimpses of us, what we’d be like when we move to be closer. Filling our weekends with activities when we can, sleepovers, stop-bys, lunch dates during the week, and a coffee break after church on Sundays. Coffee like the Magnolia place we visited after New Year's and before the JFK Memorial. I felt like I could talk to you for hours in that booth. I always felt that way, though; I could talk to you and be completely immersed.


r/creativewriting 14h ago

Short Story The Belated Epihany of Eli Wooster, or Pop!

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The frame was worn smooth at the top-right corner, pale pine stripped down to gray pulp by forty-two years of finger-oil and high-velocity anxiety.

Eli stood on the threshold of the lobby, his right index finger hovering two inches from the wood. His posture was that of a man about to disarm a naval mine with a salad fork.

To properly appreciate Eli’s hesitation, one must understand that human mortality in this particular corner of the universe did not operate on the customary schedule of long illnesses, quiet hospital bed declensions, or dramatic last words delivered to weeping grandchildren. The human body, when its allotted clock ran out, whether due to advanced age, untreatable organ failure, disease, or malady did not flatline. It popped.

Specifically, the brain stem issued a brief, definitive, firework-level detonation, leaving behind a slightly singed collar, a remarkably clean pair of shoulders, and an otherwise intact, motionless body that would instantly collapse onto the floor like a sack of damp laundry. The global life expectancy remained entirely normal, but the cause of death was, with very few exceptions, uniform, loud, and bad for wallpaper.

Naturally, because human beings despise the concept of helpless, random inevitability, they invented rules.

Eli’s family belonged to the Order of the Third Threshold, a respected group that knew for a scientific fact that one could prevent an early pop by tapping the top-right corner of any outbound doorframe exactly four times with a double-jointed knuckle. Other, less enlightened people chewed dried clove, carried polished walnuts in their left pockets, or refused to walk under telephone wires on a Tuesday.

A man in a wrinkled rain-slicker barged past Eli from behind, carrying a greasy paper bag of bagels. He did not tap the pine. He did not even lift his heels, dragging his boots across the threshold with a wet, heavy scrape.

Eli winced, instinctively pulling his chin down into his collarbone to protect his throat from the imminent shower of gore and toasted sesame. He waited for the loud, metallic POP!

It did not come.

The man in the slicker simply strolled out onto the avenue, humming an upbeat toothpaste commercial, his head resting squarely on his neck in blatant defiance of the second chapter of the Bylaws of the Sealed Vessel.

Eli’s finger remained suspended in the humid air of the apartment lobby, feeling rather foolish.

Behind the counter, Mrs. Gable, a woman whose skin possessed the exact color and texture of an old grocery sack, did not look up from her crossword puzzle.

"He didn't touch the corner," Eli said, his voice taking on the thin squeak of an instrument badly in need of tuning.

"He's a North-Sider," Mrs. Gable grunted. "They chew clove."

"Clove has no structural grounding," Eli insisted, quoting his father’s favorite evening lecture. "He's playing with fire."

"Lane seven at the bowling alley," Mrs. Gable muttered, turning a page. "His brother went off back in October mid-frame. Ruined League Night."

"Because he forgot his clove," Eli offered.

"Because he had stage-four kidney trouble," she snapped. "Now either tap the jamb or stand out of the breeze; you're letting the humidity in."

Eli reached up. His knuckle met the pale pine.

Thock. Thock. Thock. Thock.

Feeling significantly safer, Eli stepped out onto the avenue, walked two blocks to the transit stop, and boarded the 8:15 cross-town bus.

The bus was a moving catalog of blasphemy. To Eli’s left, a woman in a canary-yellow coat was aggressively stepping on every floor-seam in clear violation of basic pressure dynamics. Behind him on the right, a man reading a folded newspaper was wearing a green hat on a Thursday, an invitation to disaster so obvious it was practically suicidal.

Eli sat near the front, rigidly keeping his knees pressed together, his fingers performing the Liturgy of the Seated Passenger against the vinyl cushion.

The bus driver was an imposing man named Hector, whose neck was the width of an oak stump and whose dashboard was littered with little plastic charms from three distinct, mutually exclusive sects. Hector was currently ignoring a red light, breaking three traffic laws, and completely omitting the customary two-finger tap on the steering wheel before crossing an intersection.

Eli braced his feet against the floorboards. The yellow-coat woman hadn't popped. The green-hat man hadn't popped. And now Hector was barreling through a busy six-way junction at forty miles an hour, his head firmly attached, his hands casually resting on the wheel.

Eli looked at Hector’s thick, unbothered neck. He looked out the window at the city rushing past. A city of millions of people breaking every sacred rule Eli had ever been taught, walking under ladders, stepping on cracks, forgetting their walnuts, and inexplicably continuing to breathe.

Mrs. Gable’s dry voice echoed in his memory: Stage-four kidney trouble.

A strange, cold sensation blossomed in Eli’s chest. It was the sudden, dizzying realization that the four taps on the pine had done nothing. The clove had done nothing. The world was not held together by double-jointed knuckles or dried spices. There was no shield. There were no safety measures. There was only a universe full of invisible clocks, ticking down in absolute, indifferent silence, completely unbothered by whether one tapped a doorframe or...

POP!

It was a sharp, festive sort of noise, not unlike a party popper going off inside a metal trash can, though markedly more inconvenient for everyone currently on or in front of the 8:15 cross-town.

Hector’s dark-blue driver’s cap bounced merrily off the windshield, performed a neat little pirouette, and landed upside down in Eli’s lap like an inverted souvenir. Hector’s heavy, headless torso slumped forward onto the steering wheel with a dull, wet thud, his right arm flopping uselessly over the turn signal, which began to click cheerfully for a right-hand lane change that no one in authority was actively planning.

Regrettably, Hector’s heavy leather boot had chosen that exact moment to settle permanently onto the accelerator pedal.

The bus, liberated from human ambition and guided only by momentum, gave a jaunty little lurch to the left. It hopped the curb with the enthusiastic bounce of a puppy chasing a tennis ball, aiming itself directly at the display window of Goldberg’s Fine Pastries.

In the back, the woman in the canary-yellow coat dropped her tote bag, while the gentleman in the green hat finally paused his reading to consider whether a front-row seat to a bakery invasion constituted a cancellation of his morning commute.

Eli sat suspended in the front row, holding the driver's cap in his left hand like a potted plant and the knuckles on his right turning white against the metal handrail. The scent of freshly baked rye bread expanded rapidly through the cabin and he found himself experiencing a profound, almost peaceful clarity. The good news, Eli realized as twenty tons of municipal transit roared through the croissants, was that he no longer had to worry about popping at all.


r/creativewriting 17h ago

Journaling Winter break

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I feel like I keep searching for understanding here. I hold conversations where I bare my heart, touches where I share my soul. And yet it’s not enough, this distance remains. It remains until I’m once again on a plane back home. When I’m once again in their presence it’s like I can breathe and I am brought to tears. Of happiness, of mourning. Yes it feels like I am mourning the absoluteness of tomorrow, the countdown of days till I am gone once more. Those who truly understand me, whose presence is the very essence of home. Are forced to now only have parts of me. I wish I could carry everyone I’ve loved with me in a little book, they could come with me everywhere I go and the foreboding loneliness that sinks in, that makes its self known within the pauses of conversation, and the breath of slumber will finally leave me be.


r/creativewriting 1h ago

Question or Discussion [Dev] I built a private Mac tool that combines dictation and read-aloud to help capture thoughts and proofread by ear

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I wanted to share a personal macOS tool I spent the last few months building to help with my daily writing and editing workflow.

As a writer, my biggest bottleneck is the lag between having an idea and typing it out. I also struggle heavily with proofreading by eye (my eyes naturally skip over typos and double words when re-reading my own drafts).

So I built Hushbird. It combines two simple ideas in one place:

  1. One key starts dictation in any active text field so you can speak thoughts instantly at the speed of speech.

  2. Another key reads selected text back to you in a warm, natural voice.

Hearing my own draft read aloud has completely changed my editing workflow—hearing errors is infinitely easier than spotting them by eye.

The part I cared most about is privacy: the entire transcription and voice engine run 100% locally on your Mac's Apple Silicon chip. Nothing is ever uploaded to a server, and there is no account or internet required.

I am still polishing the interface and would genuinely value any feedback or suggestions from fellow writers on this setup! If this would help you get your drafts down or proofread your work, send me a DM and I'd be happy to give you full access to try it out.

The product is named Hushbird. I'll drop the link in the comments below.


r/creativewriting 1h ago

Writing Sample Fear has a way of disguising itself as devotion...

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EPISODE THREE — THE STORM

There was a night, early on, when I could have ended everything before it had even begun.

We weren’t officially together. No one knew we were seeing each other. Most evenings ended the same way — drinks, a movie half-watched, then her bedroom. Lately, even the pretense of routine had fallen away. I was expected to be on call, present when instructed and indifferent when my phone didn't buzz.

I was working far too many hours per week then. Sixty? Seventy? Sometimes more, and those figures exclude the hours spent driving to and from the myriad job sites, which would often increase the total by another fifteen or more. It was the kind of schedule that makes fatigue feel permanent.

That night, the storm rolled in just before I began my two hour return to home.

By the time I was on the highway, the lanes were gone. Snow swallowed the reflectors. Cars sat abandoned in ditches like discarded remnants of another time. It was the kind of drive that demands full attention.

She texted the entire time.

At first playful.

Then insistent.

She said she needed me. That she missed my face. That she couldn’t sleep without me there with her.

I told her the roads were bad. That I was exhausted. That maybe tonight wasn’t the night.

She said that told her everything.

“If you wanted this, you’d be here.”

The last message came as wind pushed the truck sideways.

“Maybe I should just disappear.”

I called. She didn’t answer.

I drove faster after that.

Fear has a way of disguising itself as devotion.

Her house was dark when I walked in. No lights. No television. Just the sound of the wind pressing against the windows.

She was sitting on the bed when I reached the far doorway.

Calm. Upright. Waiting.

On the floor beneath her bare feet was something heavy enough to alter the air in the room.

I remember the relief before anything else. Relief that she was alive. Relief that I hadn’t been too late.

I didn’t ask why it was there.

I didn’t question how the conversation had escalated from my reluctance to her disappearance.

I sat beside her.

I held her.

That night should have unsettled me enough to leave.

Instead, it bound me tighter.


r/creativewriting 1h ago

Writing Sample Between the Glances

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I have felt for a long time now that there has been something between us that is more than nothing.
And I think, in some way, we have both been aware of it. Even all those looks we shared over time. You were the one who brought it up yourself once.

I do not think it became just physical for me. Somewhere along the way, I realized that I had grown attached to you.

At the beginning, I did not even see it as something sexual. I genuinely thought you just wanted to talk and get to know me. Even when you texted me saying you were coming to take a walk and say goodnight to me, I honestly thought you simply wanted to spend time with me and talk.

I tried to distance myself from it sometimes too, or pretend it was not there, because it scared me a little. I am not used to feeling this way, especially not for this long. It is not something I have experienced in years.

I am afraid of getting hurt sometimes. I am afraid of getting attached. But I do not want fear to control me or make me walk away from something that could actually be good.

I am not looking to put pressure on you or ask you for answers about the future. I just feel like there is something different between us, something that is worth trying to understand instead of pretending it is not there.

We are about to go on break, and we will not see each other for a while. I do not want us to keep communicating through glances and pretending nothing is happening. I think we owe it to ourselves to be honest with each other instead of speaking only through eye contact.

And if you still feel that you do not want a relationship or are not looking for one, that is okay. I am not trying to pressure you or force anything. It was simply important to me to be honest with you about how I feel.

I am also not looking to get into something physical again without any direction or meaning. I know that, in the end, I want something real, mutual, and meaningful. I am not asking for promises about the future, but I do want genuine intentions instead of staying in this gray area.

I just felt that it was important to say all of this instead of continuing to pretend that everything is nothing.


r/creativewriting 2h ago

Writing Sample What Could Have Been

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I know I deserve more than this. I deserve love. I deserve to be loved and to truly feel loved.

I deserve someone who falls for me from the very first moment.
Someone who gets excited to see me smile, who loves hearing me laugh, who wants to make me laugh just so they can see me smile again.
Someone who wants to see me happy.

I deserve someone who loves the way I talk, my enthusiasm, and the fact that I notice even the smallest, most insignificant things.
Someone who loves how excited I get over little moments.
How passionately I talk about the things I love and the things that light me up.

I deserve someone who wants to take care of me, who wants to walk me home at night, be there for me in the evening and during the day.
Someone who cares about how I am getting there, whether I have arrived safely, how I am getting back, where I am, whether I am alone, and whether I am okay.

I deserve someone who looks at me with sparkling eyes, and when we are alone together in bed at night, it feels like a sky full of exploding stars.
Someone who loves watching me quietly when I do not even realize they are looking.
Someone with whom I share secret glances and inside jokes that belong only to us.
Someone who cherishes me in the quiet moments, with shining eyes and a shy half smile.

I deserve someone who gets flustered by my compliments.
Someone who notices the little things about me and compliments them specifically.
Someone who gets excited by my touch, by the way I stroke their skin, hold their arm, the way we hug, and the way we hold hands.
Someone who gently traces each of my fingers with their thumb, one by one, with quiet affection.

I deserve someone who wants to talk to me for hours, who listens to me and is genuinely curious about me.
Someone who values my opinions and simply values me for who I am.
Someone who trusts me, worries about me, and wants nothing but the very best for me.

I deserve someone who pursues me, who is romantic, and who makes it clear that they want me and are interested in me.
Someone who wants to invest in us with all their heart.
Someone who is attentive, gentle, and patient.
Someone who wants to hold me all night and never let go.

I deserve someone who truly wants to know me, who puts in the effort and stays consistent.
Someone who remains after getting to know me, even the parts of me that are not perfect.
Someone who chooses to stay despite those imperfections.

And the hardest part is that you did some of these things. So many of them.

On paper, it could have been perfect.

But when reality and fantasy become tangled together, I was left wondering what was real and what existed only in my imagination.

I guess that is the nature of fantasies.

Not all of them become reality.

They give you a glimpse of a different life, of something that could have been.

But you chose to stay in the fantasy instead of being with me in reality.


r/creativewriting 3h ago

Writing Sample A See You Later Kiss

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Looking up at the ceiling, trying not to get in my feelings. I have so many questions for you.

Like… Daddy, how could you leave when I needed you? How could you leave me in a world like this? When I told you I loved you that day, did you know you were going to be missed?

Why didn’t you talk to me about the things you were going through? We could’ve gone to the beach and chopped it up, just me and you.

Daddy, we needed you the most… especially me. I was pregnant with your grandson, and now all I have are memories. And sometimes, that’s not enough.

Missing you has truly been rough.

Before I could finish, my phone rang with the quickness. It read “No Caller ID.” With that, I went back to my dinner.

But it kept ringing.

So I picked up.

My heart sank.

I had to adjust.

The voice said,

“Hey, baby… it’s me, Daddy, calling from Heaven. I don’t have much time, so I need you to just listen.

I’m sorry you had to experience something like this, but baby girl, you’re built for this.

Remember, Slime… we’re built to last. This too shall pass.

I know you have questions, but we don’t have much time on our hands.

Tell my grandson his GD is always here.

When you had him and thought I wasn’t there… Slime, I was the one holding back all that hair, telling you to breathe, baby girl. I was there every step of the way.

I only got ten more minutes, so baby, listen.

This road isn’t going to be easy. Just put your trust in the Lord,Baby, and watch the blessings overflow.

One more thing before I go…

Remember who you are in Christ. Your past is your past. Move forward and make every second last.

I love you so much, baby.

This isn’t goodbye… it’s see you later.”

And just that quick, he ended the call with a “see you later” kiss.

I fell to my knees because they never know how deeply they’re truly missed.

Sometimes goodbye isn’t forever. Sometimes… it’s just a see-you-later kiss.

From my Daddy Until We Meet Again 🩷


r/creativewriting 5h ago

Short Story Out of Body

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Disembodied Spirit, Whole Head of Cabbage

Have you ever felt like you don't quite belong in this place, this time, or honestly, this entire dimension?

Some of us were clearly built for the "good life" (you know, the one with 1000-thread-count sheets, perfectly curated minimalist living rooms, and custom wardrobe pieces that cost more than a month's rent). Instead, I am far removed from that luxury, firmly grounded in reality, down here in the trenches with the rest of humanity.

I was an early adopter of the "life ain’t fair" philosophy. Wishes don't just magically come true; they require either a massive stroke of luck or a series of highly calculated life choices. Sadly, neither of those things seems to happen to me.

Because of this, I experience various forms of out-of-body moments. It’s hard to fit them into one tidy description, but it’s essentially a recurring series of personal oddities where I just don't feel like myself.

Take last week, for example.

I was walking home when I spotted a running group. They were all flawlessly kitted out in high-end athletic gear, draped in fluorescent bells and whistles, looking aggressively beautiful and handsome. Absolutely nothing was out of place. Every body part that should have been hanging or bulging on a normal human was perfectly toned and taut.

Staring at them on my commute home triggered a wave of profound existential guilt. I thought about how I need to be healthy, how I should exercise, and how maybe I should start by eating better.

Then I arrived home to my comfort zone, dropped everything, including my outside clothes, and immediately marched to the kitchen to pour a stiff drink. It had been one of those days. In fact, it's always one of those days.

But the true out-of-body experience happened when I opened the fridge.

Have you ever looked inside your refrigerator and seen something so profoundly strange that it slowly upsets your entire psychological well-being? You see it, you try not to acknowledge it, but it just steeps in the back of your mind.

Later, while you're on the sofa trying to enjoy an evening of scrolling or reading, it hits you. You walk back to the kitchen, yank open the door, and stare with immense mental strain thinking:

"What the actual f**k is this?"

It was a giant, apocalyptic head of cabbage.

Now, don't be offended, because I actually love cabbage. But for the life of me, trying to recall the exact sequence of events that led to me purchasing this monstrosity bewildered me to the point of genuine annoyance. I ultimately chalked it up to cognitive decline. I reasoned that I'm getting old and my subconscious knows I need to take care of myself and eat better, which must be why there is a random brassica taking up my entire middle shelf.

Satisfied with this theory, I decided to finish off the night by polishing off a chilled bottle of wine.

I got absolutely, utterly plastered.

I have zero recollection of the events that led to me falling asleep on the kitchen breakfast table, but that is exactly where I woke up, tenderly cradling the giant head of cabbage like a newborn child.

Upon closer inspection, a few chunks had been aggressively bitten out of it. I can only presume I got the midnight munchies, but hey, at least I ate healthy.

I was feeling pretty proud of my subconscious wellness journey until a week later, when I got a text from my mom:

"Hey, I left some peppers for you in your fridge. By the way, did you ever finish that huge head of cabbage I bought you? Also, I love those peace lilies in the living room!"

Lilies... What lilies?


r/creativewriting 6h ago

Short Story The 2 Constants

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"Hello, how are you?" as I see the face of the woman I've loved a thousand times look at me. I get lost in your new features.

Your eyes are green this time, your hair brown, but still the face and voice I've fallen for.

"Hello?" I snap back to that same voice about to scold me.

"Yes, I'm sorry, ma'am. How can I help you?"

I see you pick at your left hand, a hand I would kiss every morning before work. (That's a new habit.)

"I would like a..."

Before you attempt to say the order, my coworker calls out your same old name, the one I've seen written so many times.

"Katie, order for Katie!"

I see you give a puzzled look.

God, I love when you look like a deer in headlights every time.

"You've come here enough, ma'am, that I got your order ready thanks to"

(I can't be bothered to remember some random coworker's name; however, it's a lie. She's only been here three times. It's the same order she's had for the last century.)

"Oh, well," she says, luckily cutting me off.

I know that look in your eyes. You're flattered.

"As you know, I'm Katie, and you're?"

"As air-headed as you were in the other lifetimes." I think about filling the gap of her silence. My hand subtly hits my name tag instead. "Marcus, but you can call me whatever, as long as it's not 'gramps.'"

I hear the giggle I fell for all those years ago.

"Damn well, okay, butt face."

Same joke she's made at least a dozen times.

I don't know how or why, but she always finds her way to me.

"But seriously, butt face, I swear your name sounds really familiar."

I feel the same hope and joy grow in my chest. She says that every time.

"I just have a familiar name." I hand her my phone number, one of the only things of mine that never changes.

I may lose you in sickness or age, but that's whatever God's sick excuse for irony, because you may find me every time, but I fall for you harder each time.


r/creativewriting 6h ago

Short Story Another Scar, Same Day

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God, everything feels cold except for the warmth of the crimson covering my hand.

I shoot awake.

I hold my stomach tight and vomit into the trash can beside my bed.

"Good morning, honey. Oh, are you okay?"

My girlfriend's voice. I've heard it countless times, asking a question I've heard even more.

"Yes, beloved," I say, curled over my trash can.

After a minute, and after she grabs me some water, I get up and check my reflection. I remove my shirt and see a new scar joining the hundreds of others.

"Huh... stab wound this time. Worse than the last one."

I caress the scar that, just hours ago, was bleeding out.

For a moment, I remember the feeling of the blade... the warmth of my blood covering my hands.

Just another scar.

Scar one hundred and something.

"Hey, I've got to shower. You joining, or-"

"Oh shit, James."

I see the color drain from Jasmine's beautiful face.

"When did you get all those scars?"

I shrug.

"I don't know, babe."

I kiss her worried forehead.

"But you've..."

"I've never had these scars before."

"Yes, but..."

"But people don't just appear with scars."

"James, I'm serious."

"And you want me to stop playing games?"

"How are you doing this?"

"My love, we're perfect together."

I say it while pulling her dainty body close.

God, how many times must I lie to her? This is similar to Loop 56.

"Fine, I'll drop it. But you better apologize for-"

"Cutting you off tonight?"

I say, walking out of the bathroom with a smug look.

"You're lucky you're cute."

I hear her say as I walk out the door.

I walk into my kitchen, open the window, and stand ready.

A moment later, a baseball flies through and lands right into my hands.

"Thanks, Billy! Tell your wife happy anniversary!"

I yell out, seeing a guy and his kid running away from where they've been countless times before.

"Wow... it's perfect."

I set the baseball four inches from the counter's edge, put down some toast, set up a plate, and grab a fork.

Moments later, my toast shoots up.

I throw my utensil, causing the toast to land perfectly on the plate with a soft thud.

"Wow. That was better than the last three loops."

"Looks like today will be the day," I say sarcastically as I pick up the fork from the ground.

"Oh, toast."

Jasmine runs in and steals my plate, knocking the baseball off the counter and causing it to fall onto her foot.

"Ah! What the fuck? Where did this shitty ball come from?"

I yoink the plate from her hands as she jumps around on one foot in pain.

"Hey, that's mine!"

"Not true, cutie. I made it."

I kiss her nose and shuffle away.

"But you love me."

She puts her foot down and tries to lunge at me, but I step slightly to the right.

She misses completely.

"You've got to go to work. You're going to be late."

"No, I'm not. It's-"

"7:30."

"Not true. The alarm clock-"

I show her my phone.

7:25.

"Shit. Got to go."

Before I can finish my sentence, she kisses me and steals my toast.

"SUCKERRRR!"

She runs out of the house.

I grab the keys from the table, fill her water bottle, and walk through the door.

I toss both toward her.

"Hey, do you have-"

Before she can finish, she catches both.

"Wow... we really are perfect together."

"Yeah," I say, shocked.

"Love you."

She walks out.

My heartbeat is louder than the door closing.

She caught it.

Loop 34: She dropped both.

Loop 50-54: She caught one.

Loop 60: They hit her in the face.

This is new.

I look at my shaking hand and feel a grin grow across my face.

This is a development.

Maybe today will be better than the last.


r/creativewriting 6h ago

Short Story The Extremophiles

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There's a thought that there are more rouge worlds, than those bound to stars. Nearly undetectable, lurking in the deep abyss. On one of these very common objects, is a very rare thing. 

It's hard to say where it came from, or how long it's been away from its star. What is evident however is that it spent a long time around its star; long enough to develop life, and for that life to develop civilization. Perhaps flung out of its orbit by another rogue world barging into the solar system: it can only be assumed a long stable system was thrown into sudden unequalibrium. 

What was once a full nitrogen rich atmosphere now lies in frozen piles across the world's surface. Although they appear as snowy obelisks formed in rows, beneath meters of snow is the preserved remains of skyscrapers. Frozen like popsicles, the remnants of the long gone civilization looms over the tundra. 

The world grows colder each year as heat escapes its innards without being replenished. There remains one place where a hotspot warms the crust enough to be bareable. It once was a beloved collection of geysers and hosprings; a national park atop a supervolcano. Now the foundations of a megacity dig into the surface. The land has been hollowed out, mined and redeveloped into living space. To merchants, it's hard to see the place as anything worthy of calling home, but just as harbour towns have residents, so does this world. 

It is among the few planets with intelligent life that has been granted autonomy within the empire's borders. On a constitutional level, the government oversees no territories on the planet, in reality it owns and operates a number of high security prisons which benefit from the absence of due process in this foreign jurisdiction. 

As this world has floated past many systems it has collected a large population of drifters, criminals, people with access to spacecraft motivated by escaping their homeworld. It's a mining district powered by ex-convicts and operated by criminal warlords. It's slimy in everyway, perpetually taken advantage of by every government it passes by. "Anything goes", neon signs advertise down the streets of the redlight district. In some areas this is true, blocks that pedal traffiked prostitutes, others that profit from interplanetary slave trade. The individuals that partake in these businesses are acutely aware of what parts of the city they are forbidden to enter. The city is run by a handful of warlords who have it out for one another; morals may be flexible on all accords, but some sins are above all others. Brutal and constant streetwarfare has made permanent residents numb to the displays set to make the enemy into a spectacle. One such instance is in poppy fields, where crucified bodies rot as stand-ins for scarecrows. 

The government benefits most from the cheap uranium sapped out of the mines, this has made the world a frequent stop as a vital trading hub. Now nobody bats an eye to see a spaceman from earth dealing in the streets to make cash on the side. Nor are people surprised to see their state senator walking out of a sex club. 

There is no depravity too far for some city-goers to partake in. A haunting amount of people know what goes on here, but nobody seems to care. The only silver lining is that someday, perhaps someday soon, the supervolcano underneath the city will erupt and wipe out every last extremophile. 


r/creativewriting 9h ago

Outline or Concept The Caged Crown - Summary

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Note: This is to spark interest.

Synopsis: In 1966, when the 20-year-old politically inexperienced Queen of Midoria ascends to the throne, Elenora Ashila inherits a kingdom that has become increasingly polarized. Things take a dramatic turn, when high-ranking general, Rikard Pereno, urges her to make him prime minister and dissolve the parliament because of the ‘’threat’’ of communism. A caretaker hands her a telegram from a foreign reporter that tells her about what’s actually happening in her kingdom. A game of influence, persuasion, and loyalty ensues.


r/creativewriting 13h ago

Poetry Sunburn

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The first afternoon in Ibiza,

the sun was only the sun.

Hot, obviously.

Stupidly hot.

The sort of heat that makes the pool tiles look wet

even when they aren’t

and turns every British person

the colour of something that should’ve been taken out the oven twenty minutes ago.

We were meant to be saving ourselves for the party boat.

Instead, by half twelve, Bridey had ordered cava,

Disco was drinking something blue

that came with three straws and no dignity,

and Angel was photographing her own knee.

“Why your knee?” I asked.

“The light’s nice.”

“It’s a knee.”

“It’s a nice knee.”

That was Angel.

She always knew where the camera was,

even when there wasn’t one.

She could be half asleep, face-down on a sunbed,

and still somehow arrange herself

like somebody had paid her to be unconscious.

She wore a white bikini that afternoon,

tiny enough to make you wonder

whether the rest had gone missing in customs.

I was under the parasol in a shirt,

factor fifty shining on my arms,

a hat big enough to interfere with air traffic.

Disco looked over her sunglasses.

“Casper, you look like you’re waiting for the vicar.”

“I’m Scottish. This is beachwear.”

“You’re actually getting whiter.”

“I’m reflecting the sun back at itself.

Doing everyone a public service.”

They’d called me Casper since university.

It wasn’t even cruel.

It was accurate.

I don’t tan.

I go from milk bottle

to furious ham

and then straight back to milk bottle again,

usually with three weeks of peeling in between.

Bridey was beside me, pulling at her bikini bottoms.

“Do I look fat?”

“Yes,” I said.

She stared at me.

“No, obviously not. Jesus.

You’ve asked seventeen times.”

“I feel fat.”

“You had two croissants.”

“Exactly.”

“You’re getting married, not being weighed for market.”

Angel held out her phone.

“Can you take one of me?”

“I’ve already taken about forty.”

“Those were before the drink came.”

“The drink’s the size of a plant pot.”

“It changes the vibe.”

I took the phone.

Angel lay back, one knee raised, chin turned slightly,

her mouth open just enough

to suggest either sex

or mild dehydration.

I knew that look.

We all knew that look.

She’d used it online, in magazines, on hotel balconies,

and once in second year

while sitting on our kitchen worktop

with a rugby player between her legs

and me trying not to laugh because he’d left his socks on.

Nobody mentioned him much.

He’d turned out to be a complete prick.

Not tragically.

Just in the boring, everyday way men sometimes do

after convincing themselves they’re the main event

in a story involving two women far more interesting than them.

All four of us knew what had happened that night.

Nobody brought it up.

Same as nobody brought up Angel kissing me

in the bathroom two nights earlier,

or her hand disappearing under my skirt

while Bridey hammered on the door shouting,

“The taxi’s here and I am not paying waiting time

because you two have become lesbians again.”

We weren’t.

Not exactly.

We were just old friends

who sometimes got drunk

and forgot where friendship ended.

“Lower angle,” Angel said.

“I’m not lying on the floor.”

“Casper.”

“Angel.”

She grinned.

And then I heard him.

Stay.

I lowered the phone.

“What?”

Angel didn’t answer.

Her eyes were shut, face tilted upwards.

There wasn’t anyone near us.

A waiter stood by the bar polishing glasses.

Two children were trying to drown an inflatable unicorn.

A man in Union Jack shorts was asleep

with his belly pointing directly at God.

That was it.

No mystery Spaniard.

No voice close enough to belong to anyone.

Still, I heard it again.

Turn over.

Angel rolled onto her stomach.

Not sharply.

Not like she’d been told.

Just slowly, lazily,

as though the thought had occurred to her naturally.

I took another photo.

“Your arse looks good,” I said.

“It always does.”

“Healthy confidence.”

“Years of training.”

She had a lovely arse.

There was no point lying.

I’d seen it in bikinis, dresses, mirrors, photographs,

and pressed against the wall of a student flat

while the rugby player made a noise

like a wardrobe being moved downstairs.

Bridey sat up.

“Take one of me.”

“You hate photos.”

“I hate bad photos.”

The heat shifted across her.

You look thinner in this light.

Bridey went quiet.

Just for a second.

Then she pulled her shoulders back

and handed me her phone.

“Portrait mode.”

Disco was scrolling through her ex’s profile.

She’d blocked him that morning,

unblocked him over breakfast,

blocked him again by eleven

and was currently inspecting the story

of a woman she claimed not to care about.

The sun touched the freckles on her shoulders.

Nobody has ever really seen you.

She stopped scrolling.

Looked up.

Smiled at nothing.

That was when I decided the sun was a man.

Not a god yet.

Just a man.

Fernando, I called him in my head.

Early forties.

Too tanned.

Gold chain.

White shirt open three buttons lower than necessary.

The sort of man who says my darling

before asking your name

and has spent twenty years confusing confidence

with never being told to shut up.

Angel reached behind her neck

and untied her bikini top.

“Oh, here we go,” I said.

“What?”

“Nothing. Just warning the pensioners.”

She pulled it off.

No fuss.

Angel got her tits out all the time.

They were online.

They were in hotel mirrors.

They’d been in my hands twice already that week.

Still, the pool noticed.

Every man suddenly needed to look

in exactly her direction

for reasons unrelated to her being topless.

One started rummaging through a bag

that happened to be behind her.

Another adjusted his chair

four separate times.

The sleeping man in the Union Jack shorts woke up

like someone had restarted him.

Angel lay back.

The sun lowered his voice.

Let me see you properly.

Her nipples tightened in the breeze.

She smiled, but it wasn’t quite her usual smile.

That bothered me.

Angel loved being looked at.

She wasn’t ashamed of it.

There was nothing tragic about that.

She knew she was beautiful.

She also needed reminding.

Both things could be true.

I knew because I was old-fashioned enough

to want someone to write me letters,

remember how I take my tea,

wait for me on station platforms—

and stupid enough to keep falling for men

who sent fire emojis at two in the morning

and forgot my surname by breakfast.

Angel stretched one arm over her head.

Fernando warmed her stomach,

her breasts,

the white strip of skin under her bikini bottoms.

He sounded pleased with himself.

I rubbed more factor fifty into my arms.

Disco looked over.

“You’ve done that three times.”

“I enjoy having skin.”

“You’ll go home exactly the same colour.”

“That’s the dream.”

“No tan lines at all?”

“No tan.”

“Not even on your arse?”

“My arse has seen less daylight

than a priest’s search history.”

Angel opened one eye.

“That’s not entirely true.”

Bridey spat cava back into her glass.

We all laughed.

And because we laughed,

I nearly missed the voice turning towards me.

It wasn’t loud.

That was worse.

I can still see you, Casper.

I stopped rubbing sunscreen into my wrist.

The others said Casper like a joke.

Fernando said it softly.

Like he’d been waiting all morning

to get me alone.

I shifted my chair deeper beneath the parasol.

The shade didn’t feel as cool as it had before.

“You all right?” Angel asked.

“Fine.”

“You’ve gone pink.”

“That’s my natural glow.”

“It’s not.”

“It’s either rage or heatstroke.

Give it time.”

She laughed and reached for my drink.

Her fingers brushed mine.

There was nothing unusual in it.

Angel touched everyone.

But her thumb stayed against my knuckle

for half a second longer than it needed to.

The sun noticed.

Of course he did.

Men like Fernando always notice

when women want each other.

They think it’s happening for them.

You’ve always wanted to be chosen.

I picked up the factor fifty again.

“That’s enough,” I muttered.

Bridey looked over.

“What is?”

“Sunscreen.”

“You’re arguing with it now?”

“I don’t like its tone.”

By three o’clock we were on the party boat.

Everything after that came in pieces.

The harbour slipping away.

Music too loud to talk over,

so we shouted directly into each other’s mouths.

Salt drying on our legs.

Plastic cups of something sweet

that tasted like melted ice lollies and bad decisions.

Disco dancing on a bench

while checking whether her ex had seen her story.

Bridey forgetting to hold her stomach in.

Angel standing near the front,

white bikini top back on but badly tied,

hair whipping across her face

while she filmed herself against the sea.

On her phone screen, she looked golden.

Perfect.

Like the afternoon had been arranged around her.

Outside the screen,

her shoulders were already going red.

None of us felt ourselves burning.

That was the clever part.

The wind made our skin feel cool.

The sea spray kept landing on the sore places

before they knew they were sore.

Every warning arrived disguised as relief.

A bloke from Manchester asked

whether Angel and I were sisters.

“No,” I said.

“Girlfriends?”

“Only when convenient.”

Angel put her arm around my waist

and kissed my cheek.

“Very convenient,” she said.

The man laughed too loudly.

Fernando laughed as well,

somewhere inside the heat.

To Bridey he said:

Smaller.

To Disco:

Someone will regret losing you.

To Angel:

More.

And to me, hidden under the awning

with my shirt buttoned over my bikini:

Not yet.

I drank the rest of my cocktail in one go.

By sunset,

we thought we’d got away with it.

The sun dropped behind the buildings

and everyone clapped

as though he’d done something kind.

Back in the hotel room,

the burns came out.

Bridey took off her dress

and made a noise normally heard

when people discover spiders in the bath.

“My shoulders!”

Disco inspected her nose in the mirror.

“Do I look burned?”

“You look like someone’s flicked ketchup at you.”

“It’s only one side.”

“That’s worse.

You’ve been grilled unevenly.”

Angel stood in front of the wardrobe mirror

wearing only her bikini bottoms.

Her shoulders were scarlet.

So was the top of her chest,

apart from two pale shapes

where the bikini had briefly covered her.

“Oh, fuck,” she said.

Bridey looked over.

“You’re a lobster.”

“I’m not that bad.”

“You’re a sexy lobster, if that helps.”

“It doesn’t.”

“A lobster with subscribers.”

“Still no.”

We were drunk enough to find everything funny

and sober enough to know it would hurt tomorrow.

Disco tried rubbing aloe onto her own back

and nearly fell into the wardrobe.

Bridey discovered a blister

and announced she was naming it Colin.

Angel sat on the edge of the bed.

I squeezed aloe into my palm.

“Turn round.”

She looked at me.

“Bossy.”

“You’re bright red.”

“You like me bright red.”

“I like you with an intact outer layer.”

She turned.

I rubbed the gel into her shoulders.

She hissed.

“Cold.”

“That’s generally what aloe does.”

“Your hands are freezing.”

“You said that at uni.”

The room paused.

Not properly.

Just enough.

Disco was the one who broke it.

“He really was a dick, that bloke.”

“The rugby one?” Bridey asked.

“We’ve only shared one rugby player,” Angel said.

“So far,” said Disco.

Angel glanced back at me.

I kept rubbing aloe into her skin.

There were details from that night

we could still remember too clearly.

His socks.

Angel biting my shoulder

because I’d started laughing.

The way he’d messaged her afterwards

and not me,

then messaged me three weeks later

as though we might not have compared notes.

Men sometimes forget women speak to each other.

It’s how they manage to stay confident.

I moved my hands lower,

careful around the strap of Angel’s bikini bottoms.

Her skin was hot beneath my palms.

All afternoon the sun had told her

how beautiful she was.

Now she was sore

and I was the one trying to reach the bits

she couldn’t reach herself.

There was no seduction in it.

No camera.

No golden light.

Just aloe,

sticky fingers,

and Angel muttering, “Ow, ow, not there,”

while I told her to stop being dramatic.

That was love, probably.

Not the grand sort.

The useful sort.

Bridey pointed at me.

“Casper.”

“What?”

“Come here.”

“No.”

“Turn round.”

“I’m not showing you my arse.”

“We’ve all seen your arse.”

“Not sober.”

“Debatable,” Angel said.

I turned anyway.

Disco leaned down.

“Oh my God.”

“What?”

Bridey tugged the waistband of my shorts down

a fraction.

“Oi.”

“You’ve got a mark.”

“From what?”

Disco bent closer.

“It looks like a heart.”

Bridey snorted.

“A shag-me stamp.”

“Branded by the sun,” Disco said.

“Fernando’s fingered you.”

They all started laughing.

I did too.

“What a lovely way to find out,” I said.

“Three drunk women staring at my crack.”

“It’s not your crack.”

“It’s crack-adjacent.”

Angel got off the bed.

She came closer.

The others were still giggling

until they noticed she wasn’t.

Then the laughter slowly went thin.

Bridey stopped first.

Disco leaned in again.

The mark sat just above the waistband,

on the right side of my lower back.

A little red heart.

Not a vague one, either.

Not two patches that happened to touch.

A proper heart.

Small.

Neat.

Tender.

The skin around it was pale.

No sunburn.

No strap line.

Nothing to explain it

except maybe the edge of my shirt lifting

when I’d reached for a drink,

or sunscreen rubbed away by the chair.

That’s what I told myself.

Angel lifted her hand.

Her fingers hovered above the mark

without touching it.

I watched her in the mirror.

She looked worried.

And something else.

Not anger.

Not quite jealousy.

Just a tiny flicker

she’d have denied if I asked.

All day the sun had been looking at her.

Now he’d left something on me.

“What did that?” she asked.

“My shorts, probably.”

“Your shorts aren’t heart-shaped.”

“You’ve not seen the label.”

Nobody laughed.

Angel’s fingers stayed where they were,

barely an inch from my skin.

The room had gone quiet

apart from Disco’s phone playing music

from underneath a towel.

Outside, the balcony doors reflected us.

Four women in a messy hotel room.

Half-dressed.

Burned.

A little drunk.

Bridey holding the aloe.

Disco with one red side of her face.

Angel behind me, topless,

her hand suspended over my back.

And me looking at that stupid little heart.

I touched it.

It was warm.

Not hot.

Not impossible.

Just warm enough

to make my stomach turn over.

I should’ve been frightened.

I was.

I should’ve felt disgusted.

Part of me did.

But underneath that

was something I didn’t want to name.

A small, embarrassing thrill.

Because I’d hidden all afternoon.

I’d covered myself.

Stayed in the shade.

Made jokes.

Pretended I didn’t care

who was looking at Angel

or whether anyone looked at me.

And still—

somehow—

I had been noticed.

Angel met my eyes in the mirror.

I smiled.

Only a little.

She didn’t smile back.

But she understood.

That was the trouble with Angel.

She usually did.

Behind us, Bridey opened another bottle.

Disco found the hotel-room crisps.

Someone shouted about chips.

The music got turned up.

The room became loud again,

ordinary again,

safe enough for the moment.

But outside were six more afternoons.

Six afternoons of white heat,

cold drinks,

pool water,

and pretending not to listen.

Fernando would be there.

Of course he would.

Men like him are patient

when they already believe the answer is yes.

I knew what he was doing.

I knew that being wanted

wasn’t the same as being held.

I knew the sun would never stay

to cool the burns he gave us.

Angel was still watching

as my fingers rested over the heart.

I smiled at her again.

A proper smile this time.

And somewhere beyond the black balcony glass,

though the night had already come,

I could almost feel him waiting.

Not because he cared.

Because he knew

there were six afternoons left.


r/creativewriting 13h ago

Poetry “Good luck on your find”

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He’s clever like Stein
Handed me footnotes
That twists and turns
Only to make me the fool

trapped in Juliette’s body
wishing to be Victoria
I’ve been reminded of this curse

This dread is seen
A pattern I felt
Pulse strikes nice and steady
I know there’s a red string pulling
I’ll find him eventually


r/creativewriting 23h ago

Question or Discussion What tools do you use to download articles or newsletters?

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Is there any free tool to download articles or newsletters? I want to read them in my free time, anywhere I go, without needing to have internet.


r/creativewriting 23h ago

Novel R.I.F.T

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Prologue

You may read books about different universes, with magic and things that wouldn’t make sense in your world—well, our world. I came from Earth, that’s where I lived for 14 years of my life. But now everything is different… Let's start from the beginning.

From the beginning of time, there were seven guardians. They were spirits with no bodies, but when someone disturbed them and tried to open portals to other worlds beyond their own—and when that person tried to destroy the guardians—the guardians combined themselves into one body: a child.

That child was sent down to one of the worlds. They did not remember anything. That child did not know it was the key to save or destroy the world.