Just a quick idea I tracked this evening. The melody and lyrics just kind of popped into my head as I was working yesterday. Worth doing something with this?

tried some rapping and I realize it's not perfect, but I'm having a hard time telling if it's at least somewhat enjoyable, or if my rhythm is too off. Thanks for any feedback!

I often notice that after creating a song I listen to it on a different device and it doesn't sound that good, as if some db levels were off or sth. Do you think it's a problem in mixing/mastering or I'm imagining things and it's fine?

Also, do you think I should post the demo versions I make on all streaming platforms or just YouTube, like now?

Thanks for listening <33

I need feedback for this mathrock track i made. Please.

this is my first ever song i’ve released, however i’m starting to question the sound of my clean vocals on it. most people so far have been complimentary on the screams, not so much on the cleans. please give me feedback and advice on how i should proceed

New EP uploaded recently.

Specifically made for people who like to listen to music made for people who like to listen to music.

Much love ❤️

https://on.soundcloud.com/2l2MsN2nrxywVQTYlK

https://on.soundcloud.com/99VIu3QC6QzdIqcgD5

i'm asking for just brutal honesty. is the music not presentable?

is it a dying genre? is it even a familiar genre? maybe it's not for you, but maybe you know of someone who would like it? (everyone tells me "sounds good, but it's just not for me" and i'm 101dalmations sure you've heard the same thing)

maybe a drum machine despite any kind of attempt at dynamics is still just a drum machine and unattractive when blending real guitars?

is it lyrically too cerebral? (a strong song tells a story of which i cannot do, but other artists have a way of evoking emotions without a story of which i tend to tailor myself to)

is my voice off putting in anyway? (i don't consider myself a singer as i am not trained and when in the recording booth have the worst time focusing emotion/power/notes all in one to get a good capture. this is one of my better songs vocally in my opinion, but need feedback on if i'm being delusional and should just stop singing and i can take that kind of honesty. some people just don't have a voice that is palpable.)

if you heard this as an instrumental piece, would it be more enjoyable?

TED TALK: it just seems anytime i put myself out there i lose more subs than i gain and it's maddening how alone it makes us artists feel when our music doesn't seem to resonate with anyone. TYFCTMTT

Here's a more laid back track I made, does it sound like an artist could work with this?

Heyyo, been working on this Orchestral piece, it took me a week to reach this level of progress lol and there's a lot of work to do to complete the song. Here's the progress that I wanna share it in this post. Have a great day ahead!

JEALOUS (Sampling DMC's intro in "My Downfall" - Notorious B.I.G)

Ik the vocal mixing needs work, I'm currently stuck with a cheap mic but am saving up for a better one, mainly inspired by salem, chief keef, yung bruh , wicca phase,la capone , lil reese, that kinda stuff, open to feedback on what I could do better esp for future tracks, i make everything myself, the art, beat, do vocals, it's all my work, thanks!

lmk how my shi sound, i just made dis

[https://open.spotify.com/album/6UpDuOOo3Tg98JFt0TMt8k?si=ysuKOSQ2RJi\\_cTdV77\\_8kg&utm\\_source=copy-link\](https://open.spotify.com/album/6UpDuOOo3Tg98JFt0TMt8k?si=ysuKOSQ2RJi_cTdV77_8kg&utm_source=copy-link)

It consist of 2 parts. a 9 chord looped progression (sort of a verse) and than an outro piece. I plan on putting lyric to it but Im looking for feedback on the music first. I have yet to decide on adding any arrangement, right now its just piano and as bare as it can be. Appreciate any feedback.

This is my first ever decent track draft, so I’m still learning and I honestly don’t really know what I’m doing yet.

I know the intro might be a bit cheesy or cliché, but I actually like that kind of atmosphere, so I wanted to experiment with it.

The main problem is that I don’t really know where to take the track from here. I’m not sure how to continue it, expand it, improve the arrangement, or make it feel like a complete song instead of just a short draft.

I also don’t really know how to classify it. I was aiming for something inspired by artists like Sewerslvt and similar atmospheric breakbeat/DnB/jungle styles, but I’m a complete beginner and I don’t know if this would technically be considered breakcore, drum and bass, jungle, breakbeat or something else.

I’d appreciate any kind of help or feedback: composition, drums, bass, sound design, mixing, structure, or just general impressions.

Thanks to anyone who takes the time to listen!

I been working on a lot of pinknoise type beats lately. This prolly my last ones before i move on to something different.
Prolly go back to making sum color bass/edm stuffs.
So what yall think of this beat? I just finished it like a minute ago.

Any genuine thoughts on how I can improve this from here? I really struggle with mixing my voice and feel like I always end up with a robotic result but I can't tell if that's just how my voice sounds.

After my Joji post I tried to make my strings more realistic with more depth, using many different strings, ( soloist violin, violin section, viola section, cello section, double bass section+ their tremolo variant) and Pan the instruments in stereo just like in a real orchestra (bass on the right, viola in the center, violin on the left, etc) and now here's the result, did I achieved it??? Does it sounds like Joji strings style?

just looking for a lil feedback, if its shit please lemme know why, thank you. Im tryna improve.