Wip page showing the Commander and Inspector of my story.

Hannah awoke from reliving a memory of her and her father.

"Ugh" Hannah groaned as her eyes adjusted to the light.

Hannah opened her eyes to see a white ceiling fan spinning above her. She looked around to see she was on a stretcher with a white sheet covering her wearing a white gown. A strange beep caught her attention, she turned to her right to see she was hooked up to a heart monitor and a Iv. Hannah moved her head to look around and saw a red haired woman in a doctors lab coat writing something on a clip board.

"Um... excuse me?" Hannah managed to say, her throat was dry and made it hard to talk.

The woman looked up from her clip board and her eye opened in surprise. She put down her clip board her expression had turned to worry and concern. The doctor then rushed over to Hannah.

"Oh thank God your awake." She said and immediately began to look over Hannah. She shined a small light in her eye to test her pupils.

"Your Pupils look fine." She said as she raised Hannah's wrist and checked her pulse. "69 beats per minute. That's great." She said.

"Can you hear me? And what is your name?" The mysterious stranger asked.

"My name...is Hannah Yuki." She responded.

"Excellent. Now are you in any pain and can you scale it from 1 to 10?"

"My throat is dry." Hannah explained.

"Of course hold on a second." She walked over to her mini fridge, pulled out a small bottle of water and got a small bottle of asprin off her desk. She then opened the water bottle and walked over to Hannah.

"Alright here, you’re gonna have to sit up a bit." said the doctor .

Hannah managed to push her uper body up and the doctor handed her the bottle of water.

"Please take these with them as well." She said as she handed two small pills to her.

Hannah took them and drank the water with them. When she drank the whole bottle Hannah then handed it back to her. She then turned around to throw the bottle away.

"Thank you doctor." Hannah said gratefully. The red haired doctor then walked back to her and sat on the bed next to her.

"How long was i out?" Hannah asked.

"Three days. Sorry if i seemed a little anxious i was just worried because how you were dropped off here. The ncb just flew you out here without taking into account of your injuries and then threw you out onto the helipad laughing."

Hearing that Hannah realized that she didn't know where she was. "I'm sorry but could you tell me where i am?"

"Don't worry the commander will explain everything. I'll call her right now." The red haired doctor then opened her communicator and called up Jill and the inspector.

"Commander?" Hannah said confused.
Hannah looked around and saw two more stretchers. Then she began to worry where her father is. She turns to the doctor as she puts her communicator away.

"Excuse me but where is my father? He was with me in the car. Is he okay? Is he safe?" Hannah asked.

The doctor came over and sat next to Hannah. She looked at her and all the emotions just fled her body.

"Honey...the ncb informed us that...your father had died. His injuries were too much and he passed away."

He held his hand up and with his mana, took a picture of Hannah. The guard then posted the picture everywhere revealing that Hannah was the norma! A wanted poster was flashed all around the capital throughout tv, data pads, and piped up infront of everyone warning them.

The other models that once praised Hannah now were so full of fear and saying the most nastiest things. "I can't believe that thing was with us! I feel so dirty." "Get that monster out of hear before she kills us all !" "Just shoot it dead!"

Hannah didn't hear what people were saying. She just stood completely bewildered. She couldn't believe what she saw, but it was true... she was a norma.

The guard pulled out his pistol and aimed it straight at Hannah's head. Then a burst of green light came right from Hannah's left side. It hit the guard causing him to fly back to the wall knocking him out. Hannah came back to her senses and looked to her left to see her father holding out his arm up. He had shot a blast of mana straight at the guard.

"Hannah we need to run! Now!" Hannah's father ordered. Hannah knoded in agreement.

Hannah still holding her father made there way out the exit door. Down to the parking lot and broke into a mana vehicle. Hannah put her father in the drivers seat, he started it up with his mana, and Hannah got into the passenger side. Her father couldn't use his hands so he used the light of mana to make a pair of hands and used them to drive. He backed out and then drove forward out of the parking lot and into the streets at rapid speed. They made there way down the main street and like race car passed everyone. The whole time Hannah was hanging on for dear life. They managed to drive out of the city and into the country. Hannah looked at her father who was still holding his left arm and sweating like hell.

"Daddy, what's going on? This is scaring me?" Hannah asked.

Hannah's dad knew they'd be chased to hell and back for the rest of their lives. Not knowing how much time they'd have left. Breathing in deeply and fighting the pain he decided to tell her the truth.
"I'm sorry honey... I'm real sorry. I've been keeping secrets from you this entire time. The truth is." He said.

"I'm a Norma aren't I."

"Yes... your a Norma... i discovered it after you were born... when your mother discovered it... She left... she loved you enough not to turn you in... but not enough to stay... ever since then i tried my best to protect you and to not let you be discovered."

"So that's why you homeschooled me, why you told me not to use mana, and why you told me my whole life not judge by appearance but by there actions."

"Yes... I didn't want you to think badly about normas... about your self... that's why i never told you... and i pushed you to be a model because I thought it be a safe career where you didn't need mana and where i can keep an eye on you."

"How come I was never discovered? The alarm spell would've gone off and I should've been found earlier?"

"That was my doing... I've been putting a magic barrier around you to keep you hidden from that spell. I managed to learn how to cast it without using my hands or saying incantations... but the stress of keeping it up... put too much stain on my heart as i got older."

Hannah's mouth dropped a little and her eyes widened with shock on how far he went to protect her. To put his own health on the line to protect her. The relization made her feel so guilty putting him through that.

"You didn't need to do all this... you could've turned me in and I wouldn't have been a burden to you." Hannah said with tears in her eyes.

"NO! Hannah you've never been a burden... It's a parents responsibility to take care of there children... Being your father has been a honor... don't ever forget..."

Its Hildas birthday today.

Hannah walked down the runway with confidence and such bravery, the people in the crowd felt a little intimidated. She walked down the runway, got the end she stood and posed as she was flashed with so many photographers. As soon as she was done posing for about a minute she began to walk back up the runway. Her father watched her like a lion protecting his cub, with every step she took his heart began to beat a little faster with worry. His brow began to sweat, he gripped his arm even tighter as he fought through the pain. Trying to concentrate on something. Hannah was still walking to him when another shot of pain went up his left arm. Causing him to fall on and lose his concentration...

A loud alarm roared through the building all of a sudden and everyone knew what it ment. It was the alarm that went off when a Norma has been detected.

The crowd fell into silence and then they started to become anixous. Looking around with fear in there eyes, like prey looking out for a predator. Hannah saw her father on his knees and ran to him. She bent down and put her hand on his back.

"Dad. Are you okay? What's happening to you?" Hannah said with panic in her heart.

Hannah's father looked back at his daughter and took notice of the blairing alarm. A deep sense of danger and fear over took his mind. Hannah on the other hand showed no worry about the alarm, and focused on her father.

"Hannah... we need to leave... now!" Hannah's dad said.

"What no! What we need is to get you healed." Hannah protested. She then picked up her father with his arm around her shoulders. Hannah's father was too weak to protest.

They both attempted to walk back to the dressing room, but security was in the back rounding people up and testing weather or not they were norma. The security officers held up a small plate made of mana, held it up and people touched it with there hands. If it didn't break they were good. If not...

Hannah's father noticed the security testing people and got extremely nervous. He tied to nudged away from the security officer but Hannah kept making their way towards the dressing room. Hannah was about to open the door to the room when a guard put his hand on the door and stopped them.

"I'm sorry Miss Yuki but everyone has to be tested..."

"Excuse me? My father is in serious pain and needs to sit and get healed. How dare you!" Hannah replied angrily.

"I'm sorry but it’s protocol if we just do it real quick we'll get to your father." The guard said. He raised his right hand and created a small plate of mana.
Hannah got even more angry.

"GET THAT OUT OF MY FACE!" Hannah yelled.

She waved her hand to smack it away when it shattered like glass. Time stood still as everyone back stage saw the undeniable proof. Hannah was a norma. There eyes widdened with fear and there mouths dropped. Hannah's eyes widened sharply, her anger replaced with fear.

"NORMA! The guard yelled in alarm.

This next chapter of my Fanfic I dedicated to my best friend and modeled the character after her. This doesn’t reflect her in Irl it’s purely fictional. https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14509469/12/Chapter-13-live-on

2nd act of my Cross Jeanne story, read from right to left.

Also i think i did a decent job creating a somewhat different yet familiar look with the last page.

And Salia, Zola and Hilda