I’m looking for a few beta readers to give an honest critique of the opening of my dark fantasy novel, Blood and Silence.
I want to avoid info-dumping, heavy "melancholy poetry," and slow starts that kill the pacing. Instead, I’ve kicked things off right in the middle of the road with a carriage ride, tension, and a growing mystery involving a scarred protagonist.
What I’m looking for:
Is the opening engaging enough to keep you turning pages?
Does the pacing feel right, or does it drag anywhere?
Are the characters and the tension working for you?
What you’ll get:
The document directly (Word/PDF).
A short questionnaire (optional, or just leave inline comments).
My eternal gratitude (and a spot in the acknowledgments when the book is ready).
If you are interested, drop a comment below or send me a DM, and I’ll share the link. Thank you!
I'm looking for 3–5 beta readers for Unlocked, Book One of a six-book urban fantasy series targeting a November 2026 release. Spots are first come, first served — details on how to apply are at the bottom.
Mara Wolfe spent eight years as a Marine and another four years investigating homicides, cold cases, and violent crimes for the state of Utah. She is not a woman who believes in things she can't prove.
But something is wrong in the landscape around the Parowan Gap — something older than the petroglyphs, older than the gap itself. And when Mara starts pulling at the thread, she finds a world running parallel to this one: hidden, vast, and governed by rules that were old before human memory began.
She also finds Tobias Crane — an immortal who has outlived the names of the gods he once prayed to — and Khairos, the ancient entity bound to him, who turns out to be the most unsettling combination of dangerous and principled she has ever encountered.
The Man with the Dragon-Head Cane is a six-book urban fantasy series rooted in Welsh mythology — Annwn, Arawn, and the ancient things that never left. They just slipped behind a curtain.
What's required:
Click through a standard NDA and MOU before receiving any materials
Commit to a realistic feedback timeline (details provided after onboarding)
Read the full manuscript and return structured feedback via a provided Google Form
To apply, email [[email protected]](mailto:[email protected]) with your full name and email address. A line or two about what you read and why you're interested goes a long way — no credentials required, just genuine readers.
I need to take a breath and share something with you from a genuinely tender place, because this week has been one of the most exhausting and heartbreaking weeks I've had in a long time — and I want to be honest with you about why.
I have spent this entire week reaching out, responding, exchanging messages, and investing real time and real care into what I thought were shared conversations about beta reading. I was clear from the very first message about what the Solter Universe is looking for: in-kind exchange. You read. I give you early access to work I believe in with everything I have. I also provide support for any project (book/art/etc) you have in the works through reviews and testimonials (and I guess this is an additional request I too make).
That's it. No invoices. No professional packages. No business transactions.
And yet, after days, sometimes nearly a full week, of back and forth, the conversation would suddenly shift. A link to a professional website. A rate sheet. A pivot I never saw coming, despite how hard I tried to make it clear from the beginning that this was not that.
I'm not angry. I'm heartbroken. And I need a minute. 💔
So let me say this clearly and lovingly, once and for all:
👩💼 A professional beta reader is building a business. They offer technical analysis, editorial structure, market feedback — and they absolutely deserve to be paid for that expertise. That is real work and I have nothing but respect for it.
📖 The reader Solter Universe is looking for is someone who reads because they simply cannot help it. Someone who picks up a book because the description grabbed them by the soul. Someone who has lived something close to what's on the page, or who has always believed — deep down — that stories can heal.
We are looking for the heart response. Not the technical response.
The professional beta reader will ask: Does this work? Is it marketable? Does it follow the rules?
The reader I'm looking for will ask: Did this move me? Did I see myself here? Did this feel true?
Both are valid. They are simply not the same thing — and I need everyone to understand that before we begin, not three days in after we've both spent our week going in circles.
💜 What I DO offer — and what I'm asking for in return:
I invest in my readers. Genuinely. I am not looking for a transaction — I am looking for a relationship. Every single person who comes into the Solter Universe matters to me, and I show up for my readers the way I ask them to show up for the work: with heart, with honesty, and with real presence.
What I ask for in return is simple: Read the work. Tell me how it made you feel. Post an honest review when it's ready. That's the whole thing.
No payment. No professional service. Just two people who believe in the power of stories, showing up for each other.
📬 Still want to connect?
If we've already been talking and you're genuinely here because you love to read and this work speaks to you — please, keep reaching out. I want to hear from you. 💜
If you're a professional beta reader looking for paid work — I truly wish you every success. The right author is out there for you. This just isn't the right moment for us.
And if you've been on the fence, wondering which kind of reader you are — ask yourself this: Would you read this even if I wasn't asking? If the answer is yes, then I would absolutely love to meet you.
Hi, my name is Ester and I'm passionate about books
I've been reading since I was very young and have read countless books of various genres, but mainly romance and fantasy.
I decided to turn this passion into a "profession," where I offer my services as a beta reader to provide feedback as a reader.
It's very simple, I analyze your work, your story, and give you my honest opinion, providing a complete analysis of how the reader would feel reading your story.
What feeling does your story evoke? What will the reader like most? What can you do to further captivate your target audience? These are the types of questions I answer for you!
I would be honored to help you on this journey as a writer, so if you're interested, don't hesitate to contact me!
I’m building Riffable, a collaborative writing experiment where each story is made of short “riffs”. Anyone can continue a story, create an alternate path, and the community can help the best paths become finished books.
I’m looking for early beta testers, especially people who enjoy writing, fiction, worldbuilding, or creative AI tools.
I'm currently accepting fiction manuscripts for beta reading and detailed reader feedback.
I come from a professional content-writing background and have experience working with long-form content, editorial feedback, and manuscript reviews. My goal is simple: help authors understand how their story feels from a reader's perspective while providing clear, actionable feedback.
Genres I Enjoy
Fantasy
Historical Fiction
Mystery
Thriller
Romance
Young Adult
Literary Fiction
Horror
What My Feedback Covers
As a beta reader, I focus on the reader experience:
Plot clarity
Character consistency
Pacing
Emotional impact
Worldbuilding clarity
Dialogue effectiveness
Reader engagement
Confusing sections
Plot holes or inconsistencies
Questions a reader may naturally ask while reading
What You'll Receive
Depending on the project:
Chapter-by-chapter notes
Reader reactions
Detailed feedback document
Strengths of the manuscript
Areas that may need revision
Questions readers may have
Honest but constructive critique
I don't believe in tearing stories apart. My goal is to help you identify what is already working and what may need attention while respecting your voice and creative vision.
About Me
I have experience reviewing manuscripts and providing detailed editorial feedback, particularly in fiction. My background is in professional content writing, SEO content, and long-form editorial work. I enjoy analyzing story structure, character arcs, reader engagement, and emotional beats, and I naturally leave detailed notes as I read.
Rates
Rates depend on manuscript length and turnaround time. Feel free to send me:
Genre
Word count
Timeline
and I'll provide a quote.
Sample Available
If you'd like to see my feedback style before committing, I'm happy to review a short sample section first. Feel free to DM me if you'd like to discuss your project.
I've finally reached the point where I'm ready to let people into the world I've been building.
I'm looking for a handful of honest beta readers for my debut novel, The Tether.
I've spent the last few years writing, rewriting, and learning everything I can about storytelling. Now I need fresh eyes. I'm not looking for people to tell me it's great. I'm looking for readers who will tell me where they're confused, where the pacing slows down, what characters they connected with, and what kept them turning the pages.
The story is an adult dark sci-fi fantasy romance with mystery, political intrigue, morally gray characters, ancient powers, and a heavy focus on character relationships. If you enjoy stories that ask difficult questions and aren't afraid to venture into darker themes, you might be a good fit.
I'll start by sharing the first few chapters. If we both feel like it's a good fit, I'd love to continue from there.
If you're interested, leave a comment or send me a DM. I'd love to hear from fellow readers and writers who enjoy giving thoughtful feedback.
Thanks for taking the time to read this. I appreciate anyone willing to help a new author grow.
I'm working on a novel about a genetics researcher whose discovery ends her academic career right as it gets her the most prestigious invitation of her life — except the institute recruiting her isn't what it seems, and the man who steps forward to help her is not entirely human. She was raised by an Apache Medicine Singer, and as her world falls apart, the land she grew up on starts showing her things her two PhDs never prepared her for.
It's part hard-science sci-fi (CRISPR-adjacent genetics, a real research setting), part slow-burn conspiracy (something bigger than her is watching, and wants something from her work), and part myth — Apache and Hopi cosmology isn't background flavor here, it's the actual engine of the story. Tonally it's more literary than genre-typical: interior, image-driven, and I'd rather hear "the prose didn't work for me" than "needed more explosions." What I'm sharing: the opening — a cosmic preamble, a short prelude, and Chapters 1 through 7 (protagonist's breaking point, her exit from academia, and her return to the reservation where things start to shift). What I'm looking for: honest reaction over praise. Specifically —
Did the voice pull you in or push you out?
Did the mythic/paranormal elements feel earned, or did they come out of nowhere?
Any place your attention drifted?
Any lines or images that landed hard, good or bad?
Not looking for line edits at this stage — more interested in whether the whole thing holds together as an experience.
Oie pessoal, comecei agora com a leitura beta, sou adepta de livros desde criança, e nada me prende mais que uma boa história, vi nisso uma oportunidade de extra e resolvi tentar.
Estou usando a plataforma fiverr e vocês podem ter os orçamentos por lá ou me mandando DM por aqui.
Gosto principalmente dos gêneros de romance, ficção científica e young adult, mas leio demais gêneros também!
Vou te dar um feedback honesto e sem IA, porque sei o quanto muda isso pra um feedback humano de verdade.
To celebrate the release of Moody Mochi: The Mystery Box Saga, I created a fun little dance featuring the Mochi characters. It was a joy to make, and I hope it makes you smile.
Behind the dancing is a story about friendship, mystery, second chances, and a strange box that changes an entire city. What begins as a search for answers slowly becomes a story about learning to understand one another.
If you have a minute, I’d love for you to watch the trailer. If you enjoy it, a like, comment, or share would mean so much to me and helps more people discover the book.
Thank you for supporting my writing journey! 💛📖
